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The wedding was three weeks away and Nicki was more confused than ever. Her and Damon had gotten better and she had started to actually enjoy his company again. He went away with her for the month she had to go train for her movie. He helped her with the wedding plans while away, if she needed him to go take her finances while she was busy he didn't without protest. Then there was Safaree she just couldn't leave him alone, she needed him like the blues needs pain. It seems that month away from him only made her want him even more. When they were together with the kids it just felt right. Nicki knew he would lay down his life for her.
Nicki and Safaree met up with each other at the daycare to exchange the kids things. Nicki gave him Ethan's bag with a change of clothes in it because he was taking him to Ethan's friends house. Safaree brought Zaria's sweater to her. Not 10 minutes in each others presence and they were in the back of Nicki's Range getting busy in the schools parking lot. When it was over Safaree felt used, he told her it was the last time. He was done being her play toy whenever she felt like getting her jollies off. He got in his car and waited for the kids to be let out.
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Nicki walked into the house from picking up the girls from school, Ethan was going over a friends house for the afternoon. The girls ran into the house and up to their room; Nicki went into the kitchen and was startled when she seen Damon standing in front of the fridge.
"Shit! You scared me." she looked at him.
"Sorry baby." he walked over to her trying to kiss her but she turned her head. "What's wrong with you?" he looked confused.
"I think I'm coming down with a cold." Which wasn't a lie she was coughing lately.
"I don't care babe give me a kiss I've missed you." he leaned in but again was denied.
"I care." she moved around him to put her smart water in the fridge. "How long have you been home?"
"I got in at 12:30. When I didn't see you and the kids i showered and caught up on some sleep." he stood behind her and kissed on her exposed neck. "I will be here for about a week."
"Why didn't you tell me you were coming back today, i wasn't expecting you until next week?" she slid out of his grasp.
"I wanted to surprise you but it seems like you're just annoyed."
"I'm not annoyed."
"Obviously somethings wrong, you're being short with me." he leaned against the counter waiting for her to say something. "Well, tell me what's wrong."
"I told you nothing, just let it go Damon."
"No something has you upset with me and I don't need you mad."
"I said nothing so it's nothing." she tried walking past him but he grabbed her arm.
"Talk to me."
"Get off me." she tried breaking from his grip already knowing it was a lost cause. "You're hurting me." he let go but blocked her path.
"I didn't mean to hurt you but when you shut me out it makes me angry."
"What do you expect me to do? You are never here."
"Are we back to this again, i thought you got over that?"
"Back? Nigga we never left. I don't feel loved, do you understand that?" she raised her voice.
"Don't feel loved?" he repeated. "I tell you I love you all the time Nicki."
"Telling me and showing me are different."
"This is crazy." he backed up.
"What's up with Lesley?
"What about her?"
"You ever fuck her?" Nicki crossed her arms.
"Nicki you're being childish."
"Childish? There is a female in your room, who might I add I have never heard about nor met before and I'm childish for wanting to know if you slept with her or not?" Nicki said staring at him. "This woman has been around for a month and you have never once said anything about her and you expect me not to ask questions. You have left out of this city on several occasions for business" she did air quotes "in the past month. How am I suppose to react? So again I'm going to ask you one more time, have you cheated on me with this Lesley woman or any other woman since we have been together?" they locked eyes.
"Never once have I cheated on you with Lesley or any other woman Nicki." Nicki continued to stare at him trying to figure out if he was telling the truth but she couldn't get a read on him. "Now it's my turn to speak. You have to realize that I cannot cater to your every need Nicki. I try my best but I'm just one man, I try to be there for you as much as possible. I do love you Nicki, I wouldn't have asked you to marry me if I didn't. You have to trust me."
"I don't know who you are anymore. In these past months I can't name a single time where we have actually sat down and had a deep conversation with one another like we used to. You made time then so what's the problem now?" She waited for a response but he just looked at the floor. "Exactly, so are you sure you want to marry me?"
"Yes I'm sure. Nicki I..." he was cut off by his phone ringing. He picked it up and seen that it was his boss. "It's Mr. Wiseman."
"Answer it, I'm used to coming second." she walked passed him, he grabbed her hand but she snatched away and went upstairs.
"We'll finish this when I'm done." he answered the phone.
Nicki went upstairs to her room closing the door behind her. She picked up the phone to call her mom.
"Hello?"
"Mom i don't know if I can do this." Nicki said sitting on the side of the bed.
"Do what?"
"I don't know if I can marry Damon."
"What happened?"
"He's never here mommy. He makes promises he never keeps. I don't know what to do."
"Baby relationships are hard work. There will be times you can't stand him but you can't just give up because of it. Trials and tribulations are going to always pop up in a relationship no matter if it's with Damon or another you are with. It will never be a smooth ride. Do you still love Damon?"
"Yes mommy I do but he is never sensitive to my feelings. It's like i tell him something and it goes in one ear and out the other."
"Have you told him this."
"Yes on multiple occasions."
"Did you scream at him or did you tell him."
"What's the difference, I still told him."
"There is a big difference, If you screamed of course he wouldn't pay you attention. If you actually sat him down and said listen Damon this is what I need from you and this is how much of it i need. He would be more open to listening. But you yelling only shuts down the effective flow of communication."
Her mom was getting through to Nicki. She realized that when they did have the conversation she was mostly yelling at him. Now she had gone and accused him of cheating.
"You're right mommy. But I think I may have dug myself into a hole."
"What did you do?"
"Well I kind of accused him of sleeping with another woman and having a baby by one."
"Nicki."
"I know but I just have this gut feeling, and it keeps getting stronger and before I knew it i was confessing it to him."
"What did he say?"
"He says he has never slept with another woman."
"If you have no proof then don't bring it back up until you do. that's a very big accusation." Nicki sat and chewed her lip.
"I guess I need to go apologize. He's here for a week and I think I'll be apologizing for most of it."
"Well your mouth has always gotten you into trouble."
"I guess I learn one day."
"Won't be no time soon." Mrs. Maraj said laughing.
"Mommy." Nicki whined.
"It's true. Go and fix it and I will talk to you later."
"Okay, I love you."
"Love you too. Give my grand babies a kiss for me."
"I will and kiss daddy and lambchop for me." They hung up and Nicki went downstairs to find Damon. When she was about to walk out the room he was walking into the room. "Damon--"
"Nicki I'm really trying to make us work but you yelling never makes it easy."
"It's hard not to be mad and yell when you are always at work and never seem to make time for me. You drop everything when your job calls but when I need you you always have an excuse. This week I want to work on us while i have you here for the week." she wrapped her arms around him.
Damon groaned and sighed.
"What was that for?" Nicki asked looking up at him.
"I have to leave in a hour for a meeting."
Nicki dropped her arms.
"Let me guess, in Kentucky right?" She went back upstairs.
"Babe? I'll try to be back as soon as possible." he yelled.
He was meet with her door slamming shut.
Later that Night
Damon had to go check on the factory in Kentucky so once again she was left alone. She was pissed but that seemed to be her attitude lately. Nicki wondered what Safaree was up to, she called him.
Safaree was hanging out with his boys playing cards and drinking. He was unwinding from the hectic week he just had with Nicki. They had made appearances everyday this week on, radio shows, TV shows, she even did Watch What Happened to discuss the Real Housewives of Atlanta. That go a little messy because she got a tipsy on the show and start letting out too much of how she felt about the ladies.
It felt good to relax and not have to worry about running around and meeting Nicki's every demand. And he was also starting to feel bad because every spare moment they got he was buried deep inside knowing she wasn't a single woman. He didn't know what it was but he just couldn't get enough of her. It reminded him of when they were together. He was deep in thought when his phone went off, he saw it was Nicki.
"Hey, is something wrong with the kids?" he asked automatically.
"No calm down they are fine. They went with auntie Candi for the night."
"Oh okay."
"What are you doing?" she had her legs up against the head board.
"With Rex and them, why you need me to bring you something?" he got up from the table and went into another room, the music was to loud for him to hear.
"Define what you are willing to bring me." she said in a sultry voice. Safaree seen where this was headed and knew he had to stop it before it went to far.
"Nicki where is your fiancee?" he asked in a whisper.
"He just had an emergency conference he had to go to in Kentucky or I don't know, so he is somewhere in the sky. Come over and have fun with me daddy." she said in her pouty voice.
"No you have a man." he went back into the room and sat down watching the men play Spades, he wasn't trying to hear her tonight.
"Do you have your earphones with you?" she scooted away from the head board.
"Yeah why?"
"Plug them up to your phone."
"I don't have the ones with the mic, so you won't be able to hear me." he put some chips in his mouth.
"Just do it."
Safaree sighed digging in his pocket for his ear bud Beats by Dre earphones, he plugged them in.
"Safaree?" When he didn't answer she knew they were in.
Nicki had taken off her sweats. leaving her in nothing but her red lace thong and matching bra.
"Faree i wish you were hear with me right now. Holding me, among other things." Safaree knew he was slowly losing this battle. "Don't you want to touch me Safaree?" she was rubbing all over her body wishing they were Safaree's hands. "Come to me Safaree." he voice was dripping with lust. He thought about all the wicked things she could do with that tongue of hers. Nickis phone buzzed.
Safaree
No Nicki. I told you last time was it for us. STOP!
As quickly as she read the text she forgot it. "Now Safaree your not going to leave me hot, wet, and horny now are you?" she slipped two fingers into her center folds and began pleasuring herself. A moan escaped her lips which made Safaree shift in his seat. He looked around making sure no one was paying attention to him, they weren't.
"Mmmm Safaree." Nicki was laying it on thick. She wanted him and if she had to pull out the big guns she would.
Safaree
Stop Nicki, I'm around people.
"All the more reason to come see me, so I can help take care...Ooooo...that bulge in your pants." he looked down as he felt his pants getting tighter. He turned his attention back to her.
Nicki had dropped the phone next to her head and concentrated on her. She was working herself into a frenzy on her bed.
"Ahhh...Safaree." she moaned. "Ssss...." he could tell she quickened her pace by her breathing. "Mmmmmm...I...I need you Faree." he heard her cry out his name, then silence. Minutes later he heard movement on the other end. "I can go another three rounds are you going to make me go them alone?"
"Alright niggas, I'll catch y'all later." he jumped up from his seat.
"Where you goin?" Rex asked.
"I got business to take care of."
"At one in the morning?"
"Mind your business. Stay icy coons." Safaree text Nicki on his way out the door.
Safaree
I'll be over in 20. I'm not going easy on you this time either. ;)
Nicki
I'm starting round 2. Use your key.
Safaree hopped in his Bentley and took off hoping to make it by round three. "Damn she a freak." he said smiling.
After
"I've missed having your body whenever I want." Nicki was still straddling SB, kissing various spots on his chest.
Safaree just laid there staring off into space. He never thought he would be sleeping with another mans woman, this was truly a first.
"Why you acting like this?" he turned looking into her grey eyes, she was scowling.
"Acting like what?"
"Like you don't want to be here with me." Nicki pushed off him and got out of the bed with the comforter wrapped around her body. She headed to the bathroom. Safaree wrapped the sheet around his waist and followed her.
"Nicki what are you talking about, did I not just spend the last two hours sexing you the way asked me too?" he was confused where her attitude was coming from.
"You used to hold me and tell me you loved me after we made love." she stared at him through the mirror.
That was before you were someone else's girl he thought. "What do you want from me Nicki? I'm doing what we agreed to when we first started this. No strings attached, no emotions, just sex, remember?" he felt like an asshole saying that to her knowing how he felt about her, but this was what she wanted.
"Are you telling me us being together these past couple of months has meant absolutely nothing to you?" I shouldn't have asked that she thought.
He'd be lying if he said 'no' so he just said nothing at all. if she wanted him she would have to say the words or better yet she would have to call off her wedding to Damon.
"Wow silence...um...wow okay." she started fidgeting. How could I be so stupid he dropped me back then so why would he want me now. Especially after seeing I'm a cheater. "I'm going to shower, you can let yourself out." She nudged him out the bathroom.
"Nic--"
"No Safaree, I get it. Please just go." She was tearing up.
"I didn't mea--"
"I'm a big girl Safaree. I asked for this and i can deal with the consequences." He reached for her but she closed the door quickly.
Nicki walked to the mirror and stared at the woman staring back. "You will not cry. You made the rules so deal. You caught feelings, so it's your problem not his... then why do I feel so betrayed?" Nicki walked dropping the comforter and turned on the shower waiting for it to get to the right temperature, she stepped in. "Why can't you just keep your emotions to yourself?" she thought. "Because I still love him." she finally confessed above a whisper to herself. Her tears spilled over onto her cheeks. "FUCK!" she screamed sliding down the shower wall. With the water beating against her body Nicki sat and held herself as she sobbed.
Safaree POV
"Shit." he thought. He didn't mean to hurt her, be he didn't want to put his
feelings out there to be rejected. If he could redo the past five minutes he
would.
Safaree listened from his side of the door as he heard her mumble something
then the shower started up. Minutes passed and he heard her sobs, his heart
ached listening to her. He jiggled the handle already knowing it was locked. Safaree knew she wouldn't open the door nor would she come out if she knew he
was still there. He gathered his clothes and left the room.
Half an hour later Nicki had pulled herself together enough to stand. She
showered quickly trying to get back to her bed. Wrapping herself and hair in
her towel she went to find clothes. Looking at the bed when she came out she
noticed the linen had been switched.
Nicki was sitting on the bed thinking to herself when Safaree came into the
room. She thought he had left. Nicki wiped the tears from her face.
"Listen I didn't mean too hurt you." Nicki rolled her eyes.
"Just like a nigga." She rolled her eyes. "These tears aren't for you, there for me. Why are you still
here?" She got under her covers.
"I needed to make sure you were okay."
"I'm fine now leave."
"Don't be like that." he sat on the side of the bed. Safaree reached out to
touch her cheek but she batted his hand away quickly.
"Do not touch me."
"I heard you crying in the shower, do you want to talk about it?"
"No I don't want to talk about it Safaree. Now leave." he was getting pissed at
how cold she was acting towards him.
"You practically begged me to come over here now you acting like I ain't shit!"
he raised his voice which made her sit up in the bed.
"That's because you not shit." she pushed his head with a great force. "Get the
fuck out." She hit him again. "Safaree get out." she coldly stated. Nicki began
slapping and punching him in his face while tears streamed down his face. "I
hate you Safaree. I hate you!" Safaree grabbed her arms trying to take control of the situation.
"Calm down."
"Get off me!" she tried pulling away but he just held her close to his body. He
wished he could hold her like this when she was calm but the issue still
remained that she belonged to another. Even now looking at her left ring finger
and seeing the ring he didn't put there tore at him. Safaree noticed she had
stopped fighting him and now clung to his body. She was again crying.
"Why do I continuously want what I can't have Faree?" It's like I never learn
then end up heartbroken and confused." Nicki confessed. "I'm such a basket case, I don't blame you for not wanting me." she lifted from his embrace. "I'll be
fine, you can go." Nicki felt like a fool and was embarrassed he had seen her
act this way. "And don't worry this was the last time I'll call you for
anything like this. From here on out it is strictly professional between us.
Neither of us need this headache."
Safaree got up from the bed. He wanted to know what she was planning to do
about the wedding. "So what about Damon?"
"I'm going to marry him and live my life."
"Do you love him?"
"I'll learn too. My kids love him and that's who I need to be thinking about."
If she was going to completely get over Safaree she had to learn to look at
him as nothing more than a friend like she used too. Nicki looked up at him and
noticed he was clenching his jaw.
"Fine." he turned and swiftly left the room then eventually the house. Nicki
watched from her window as he pulled off into the into the night, she watched
until she could no longer see his tail lights.
Nicki went into the girls room for no particular reason. She noticed that Daria
had left Tubsie her stuffed Rabbit. She knew Candi was having a time getting her to go to sleep.
She would take it to her tomorrow. She turned out all the lights and climbed
into the bed letting the worries of the day go and fell asleep.
One week Before the wedding
Nicki pulled up her laptop to see what the barbz were doing. She didn't want them to see her so she didn't tweet anything she just read her TL. She saw people talking about "onikafaree" and "dricki" this normally didn't annoy her, but the fact that she was so confused but felt that Safaree was the one she really wanted, she got emotional over the barbz talking about it. She decided to tweet.
@NICKIMINAJ: Tired of hiding my feelings.
The tl went crazy. Nicki was tired and decided to call it a night. She laid her phone on her nightstand and climbed into bed. Just as her phone started going off Damon walked in.
"Babe you going to sleep already?" Damon asked sitting on his side of the bed.
Nicki quickly turned her volume on her phone down and said "I have to get up really early and I don't want to wake you."
He didn't think much of it. "OK babe."
"Goodnight."
"I love you Nicki."
Nicki almost choked before saying it back... "I love you too Damon." she remembered that her phone had rung. She picked it up.
@SCAFFBEEZY: Come home.
She cried silently after reading this. She wanted to come home. She wanted to be with her kids and live with Safaree. She just wasn't ready to admit it to him or anybody.
"I'm going down to the studio to write, don't wait up for me." She left the room quickly.
She cued up everything and started playing the beats that different producers had given her. Before she zoned out completely she tweeted one last time.
@NICKIMINAJ
Emotionally: I'm Done. Mentally: I'm drained. Spiritually: I'm Dead. Physically: I smile.
*My Baby! =( Why she doin this to herself? I'ma have to cawl her and have a heart to heart. Well I hope you enjoyed this weeks love triangle....I hope everything is making sense to you guys. Once i turn this into a book it will be written WAY better, I promise! 40 comments or no WEDDING! And ZON'T say "Ion want the wedding no way!" bc without it the story can't and WON'T continue! I encourage ALL my readers to comment, I appreciate all those who comment on a regular. ALSO PLEASE go to a good friend of mines NEW ONIKAFAREE fic and subscribe! The link ----> http://onikafareeofficial.blogspot.com/ Until next time my darlings, Smooches!*
My poor Nika imma need for both of them to just spill and wedding ugh..ion like it pineapples
ReplyDeleteI hate that she is emotionally draining herself with this when she knows who she really wants, ugh i hope she just calls it off before the weddin plus damon is a douch, doesn't even know or pressure his fiance to tell him whats wrong, like wtf... and what is he hiding that's what i wanna know smfh! UGH
ReplyDeleteugh, i super need onikafaree to be great real soon, every chap i think its ganna be it and it aint. lmao, i knew Safaree wouldnt be able to resist Nicki in that voice and dead at them in the car park....FREAKS. I just want nicki and safaree to be happy now , *sigs*
ReplyDeleteBring back onikafaree I don't even like damon cheating ass. My nic is sad which makes me sad :'( post soon please!!
ReplyDeleteOkay great chapter !! ... I feel bad for nicki cuz it really is her fault ... She think she can have anything n everything at anytime .. Life doesn't work like that .. But she gonna get it together .. Now for her comin at Damon she have every right to speak how she feel a women's feelings is never wrong .. But she also may have this feeling cuz she out doing her dirt wit SB so she just might be feeling guilty .. Other thing nicki needs to learn how to communicate wit ppl .. She always pushin ppl away knowin she want then to be there ... SB Iis doing the right thing by being distant but who can resist nicki lmao ,. But he needs to tell her how he feels maybe she'll make the decision that she really wants .. But at the same time she don't know what to do with Damon .. LOVE TRIANGLE !!!
ReplyDeleteWait...was I the only one that caught that this is gonna be made into a book!?!?!? I'm coppin dat...PROUDLY!!!! Sfdghdg ok. So its out there. She wants Safaree, she loves Safaree, and is basically making herself love Damon. No Bueno. She's about to get married which is not right, so when they ask for objections, SOMEONE better or needs to speak up! Tbh Damon doesnt seem like he really cares, idk. And this secret of his....he's still hiding something!!! -___- We all know Onikafaree is where its at. Nicki wants the kids around him and her together so they can be a family. She is so stubborn so when Safaree doesnt express or tell Nicki how he really feels about her, she shuts him out and her whole mood changes. *Sigh* So the wedding is next...We'll see what happens! And again...a book ffgddggss!!!!!!
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DeleteIt's bad to say, but I'm all for these onikafaree sexcapades that be going down. I mean like really fuck damon up the ass with ten dicks no vaseline/ky or nothing. Lmaoooooooooooooooo nic butt is a straight freak forreal. Lol smh at how she seduced him to her. Awwwwwwwwwww no they're fighting noooooooo. Y can't they just tell each other how they feel already? Damn I wasn't gon even comment too smh good thing I read the entire comment at the end cuz I was gonna be one of those fuck that damn wedding and damon ass too commentors. FORREAL THO MY EARLIER COMMENT ABOUT FUCK BOY I MEANT WHOLE HEARTEDLY *fixes halo* ok we good now let's roll :-)
ReplyDeleteI don't know how Nic thought she would be able to have sex with him without catching feelings when it was someone she loved sooooo much o.O. I hope she stop being so stubborn and tell SB about her feelings for him soon! They both know the love they still have for each other and that fight was just :'( idek. Anyway this was a great chapter :)
ReplyDeletePoor baby :/ she's too stubborn to say how she really feels. MAking yourself love somebody isn't going to work. She wants Safaree and goddamnit they need to be together, fuck a Damon. I still think Damon cheating idc, something isn't right about him. She was bound to get her feelings hurt by proposing the cuddy buddy deal to Safaree. They. Need. To. Be. Together.
ReplyDeletebring on this wedding and stop playing with ny enotions k k great... lol i loved this chapter but ima need my punkin butt to get it together..... go back to my bro be happy with the kids... i need the lovey dovey onikafaree stuff back real shit! and fuck Damon dick in his faccccccccccce put my dicccccccccccck in his facccccc cce stupid fuck boy!
ReplyDeleteYou Zumb! lmaooooo
DeleteI had an entire page but blogger keep deleting my shit. Ol pissy ass bastards. Shit. I'm kinda irritated so this may be brief.
ReplyDeleteAwe Nic can't stop thinking about Safaree while she was gone even though she was with FUCK BOY BITCH DAMON. I know it may sound weird but i love when Nic and Damon argue. I feel the wedge being drawn between them. I love it. It's like Iont think he cheating but I know he doing something sideways. He shady. Then when something is wrong with her he never really wants to find out. He doesn't attempt to really dig into her feelings he a bitch. I hate that nicca. I need to know what he has up his sleeve. It's crazy.
Now her and Safaree Smh. They can't resist one another. EVER. DEAD at them having sex in the Range in the school parking lot. Lol cute. Then DEAD at Nic seducing Safaree over the phone. Lol he couldn't resist that ass. He wanted that BOX and she wanted that ZICK. Lol they a pair of HORNBALLS. Sounds like me :-D I just wish they could get past this miscommunication that they are experiencing. Like they both holding back and it's crazy. I just want them to be true and upfront. Like them holding back is killing everything. Even Nic is settling for Damon talking about she will learn to love him. Fuck that. The kids need their father and her under one roof. ONE ROOF. FucknDAMON. He has nothing to offer. He's a dawg. A SNAKE. Asshole. Safaree and Nic need to get it together ASAP. I'm tired of Nic feelings being crushed im tired of her being sad. She said she's tired of holding back but yet she's still doing it. That last tweet she did FUCKINGG MADE ME CRY. It spoke to me. DEADASS. Like, that was deep. I want things fixed before the wedding. Someone better INTERRUPT. OBJECT. Something. It cannot go on. Post soon. Update soon. This was POPPIN Martha. And wait oh shit you said a BOOK?! A BOOK?! Ajsksakalalalshajajabaj YASSSSSS. Anyway, this was awesome. I can't wait to find out more. Ugh.
-@MinajFanDetroit
Yooooo first I want to say you are a great fucking writer! And a book?!!!!!! Im definately copping that! This chapter was amazing! But my poor Onika! She's so confused and mentally drained. I don't like Damon and I object this wedding! Idc idc idc! Lmao let Onikafaree be great. For some reason I was ctfu when Nicki was beating up Safaree :'( poor SB! But Nic needs to be with Safaree and not that good for nothing Damon! FOH! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! THIS WAS REALLYYYYY GOOD! Post soon! xoxox :)
ReplyDeleteOMG ALL I CAN SAY IS...BEST ONIKAFAREE STORY EVER WRITTEN!!! I JUST CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AHHHH
ReplyDeleteAwwww thanks hunnie! I can't wait to reveal what's next! lol Thank you for the support!
DeleteMaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnn this is crazy nic need 2 let go of her pride, both of them do ,she wants him , he wants her they need 2 just let Onikafaree be great !!!! Damon is only using nic and i think he slowly taking money from nic cuz she got him handling her finances. I'ont like Damon RNS he can suck a sick dick #NoPauz Safaree needs crash the wedding like in the movies lol...Im so ready 4 the next chapter !!! Oh and Im most definitely gettin that book (: -@toya_soso_trill
ReplyDeleteI need her to not be so stubborn and go back to Safareeeee!
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next chapter! Hope there will be one soon!
Aaaawwww Poor Nic
ReplyDeleteI hope she really comes home
I can't wait for the next chapter
@MASHINGTONMINAJ
ReplyDelete-refrains self from saying that there shouldn't be a wedding-
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.
Welp/ EYE am the basket case. ion want a wedding, but i know that you'll make it AMAZZINGGGGGGG with the drama and the emotional stuff and HOPEFULLY Safaree realizing that hey, you know. I MISSED MY CHANCE WITH A WONDERFUL WOMAN. so yeah. im a sucka for awlla dat :''(
That part when Nic was horny.. twas hotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt. OMG. but then you know they didn't have emotional sex therefore.. :l AH. ionno. I'd rather see more intense drama like the whole ion love you but i DO but jalkajsdajlsdjljlajl YOU know stuff like that. :l
AVITE. das ma review.
and if you're actually writing a book
IMMA BE THE FIRST ONE TO BUY DAT SHIT ONLINE OR WHATEVER.
Awww. I'm sad for my Onika. She need to get her shit togeva. But can Damon be eliminated from life plz. He's annoying. The fuck kinda husband is he gone be If he cant tell his fiance ain't in love wit him. Safaree needs to bring Nicki home because if he doesn't she'll never come.
ReplyDeleteI'm pissed and I'm in a crazy mood: *plays letcha go*
ReplyDeleteNicki spill everything to faree sauce!!!! Damon don't care, he think he love you do he look like cupid??? Also y'all cant be playing the fuck buddy role if you love him!! And call off the wedding with his dic in the booty looking Damon! Oooo he get on my nerves!! O-nicka-faree not danicki?, Dicki?, man whatever, I cant wait till she dump him and finds the true love!!
P.s. ima buy the book *saves up* :) you really deserve to have a book made because of your God given talent of writing.
Great chapter, good luck on the book! Muah<3
*clenches heart* Your P.S. really made me smile! Thank you! ANd I'm glad you liked it!
DeleteI Have A Lot to say but first off let me just say this I read a lot of Fan Fics about these two and let me say THIS Is THEE BEST ONE out there!! This story was the best even when it was in the beautiful mistake stage! I freaking LIVE for this story. I want to thank you first for updating so soon! God must have told you to post cause only he knew how much I wanted the next Chapter! I also want to say that you are so freaking talented it's not even funny. It takes a lot of creativity to keep a story going this long and to still keep peoples interest and I commend you for it so much. I could go for days talking about how much I love this story but let me get back to commenting on this chapter!!! Ok so let just say that sb and nicki's occasional little sex dates are so sexy! they are TOO cute together. But as soon as i read that SB told her that was the last time and she came home poppin off a damon I know she was only pissing cause she couldn't have her cake and eat it too SMH she spoiled! but I think SB did the right thing she can't be using him like that he freaking loves her to death and they playing around with each other emotions? they both wrong. And you know what I almost punched this damn computer screen when Damon put his hands on my baby oooooo if only safaree would have been there to kick his ass. He might love her but he's also hiding something and when nick has a gut feeling she knows what she's talking about so I wanna know what this man is hiding! pardon me for skipping around the story like this but when nick was crying in the shower I was tearing up I hate even thinking of the thought that my HB is in any kind of pain. I really wish that they would stop hurting each other why can't they both just tell one another their in love? I really hope SB stops that wedding and just comes out with it. Anyways that's what I had to say in "short terms" lol but I FREAKING LOVED this chapter and can't wait till the next one *dreams about a day when this could become a book*
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Aww,Nicki. :-( My baby's sad. Safaree and Nicki Need to work thing out like NOW. I really think safarees gonna stop the wedding. Hope SO! ONIKAFAREE
ReplyDeleteUuuuggggghhhhh! Safaree needs to just pour his heart out to her and Nic needs to do the same. And at the wedding she shouldn't say I do, she should just run and go to SB. Yup. Make them cute again :( lol. And Damons still a sneaky cock -_-
ReplyDeleteUgggggghhhhh I just want her to be with Safareeeeeee but I'm ready for more legoooo let's let the wedding happen or maybe almost happen and see how it goes from there!
ReplyDeleteSooo uhmmm, what is this book you speak of? I LOVED this chapter it was a lot in it but it wasn't too much to where the point where you were confused. .I like this posting pattern that you are on though . .Post (very) soon . .
ReplyDeleteNOOO You did not!! How could you finished this chapter like thiS :'(
ReplyDeleteMy Nic is soo confused..She knows what she wants but she doesnt go and get it..And I'm gettin tired of Safaree hiding his feelings like sayyyyy something nigga..like she said she'll "LEARN" to love Damon..she ovbiously loves you dont let her slip away that easy...smh
Im taking it too serious
It made me so sad when she said 'You used to tell me you loved me after we made love'.
Oh and btw, I'm not ready for them to be done with their LITTLE agreetment
Like I'm dead ass hoping they get busy the day before the weeding Lmaooooo.
I enjoyed reading this chapter...fave one so far
I just pray Nicki follows her heart
*sig* You just made my night. Even with that ending -_-
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!! :)))
I really want Nic to go home to Safaree, her family.
ReplyDelete*Hands you crown* I felt my heart broke when SB said "come home" PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me he gone stop the wedding or something because i can't with Damon not making Nic happy... Im here for Nic teasing Safaree
ReplyDeleteI CANT DEAL...thats all i have to say.
ReplyDeleteLAWDDDDDDD. *clutches heart o' mines* :O
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ReplyDeleteokay.
My poor Nic, holding feelings in is never good. They both need to tell each other how they really feel.. and Safaree needs to interrupt the wedding or Nicki needs to be like 'i can't do this!' or something. Lol ionno. Post soon!
Great post.......i think that nicki just needs to really think about what she wants for herself nd also for her kids i think that her nd damon should go sit down nd have an actual conversation and tell eachother how they really feel.... then its gne be all good in tha hood lol...post soon :)
ReplyDeleteHooooMyyyGawdddd We Need To get Rid Of This Damon Character. I'm Tired Of You letting Him Be Great. Lol Poor SB. Nic Need To Just Admit To Him She Love Him So They Can Live Happily Ever After!!! Martha Why Do I Get This Strange Feeling Damon Is Gay? Over All Great Chap Even Though You Start SumSum Then Just Skip To The End Like !!! Give Me The Details. Come Gurllll ;). Lool, Love you Martha
ReplyDeleteOk, so I'm a new reader & I just caught up on all of these chapters. I love the story, but why Nic putting herself thru that lol? I hope she can be upfront with Safaree before the wedding & I hope Safaree can do the same with Nic. Damon can leave lol! Can't wait for the next chapter. Btw, I'm @NiqueWannaMINAJ :-)
ReplyDeleteUm i dont trust Damon with Nic's finances, i bet he did do it without protest. Of course she cant leave SB alone she's IN love with him, and that month away would make her want him more because absent make the heart grow fonder. Wut the... in the school parking lot r u serious, they some freaks and i need to accept it and stopped getting shocked lmao.
ReplyDeleteDamon needs to get his lips away from Nicki she dont want that shit obviously i wish he would realize that, take the fuckn hint DAMON! WTF he hurting her, oh hell no he gotta go RightMuthafucknNow!! Ok maybe he not cheating but he up to something, i think he stealing from her or going to steal from her. No Mama Carol dont talk her into working it out with that dawg, Nic dont listen to ur mom this time cuz u dont need Damon in ur life. See he aint going to change, its always going to be his job then Nicki and thats not going to work.
Oh wow Nicki must really be stressed cuz she would never get tispy at one of her appearance's. Yes stand up to Nicki, u not gon be the other man no more, u want to be the one and only. OMG she really doing that i cant with her, Nicki is really... i i im speechless. Damn she got him she knew he couldnt let her do them all alone. Lol Rex and them knew it was a booty call wut else could it be at 1am.
Poor Nic is so confused she snapping for no reason, i just want her back to herself. Damn SB cant win for losing, he should have just told her he still loved her and wanted her back. My poor Nika really going thru emotionally and mentally.
Damn Nic need to stop being so hard on him and need to stop saying shit he's going to regret, they both love each other and is saying some mean shit. Damn is all i can say.
Omg this last sections was just beyond sad to me, like i hate to see Nicki like that. Aw SB told her to come home *cries* i cant take this.
Fix her Martha make her happy again, fix them Onikafaree
~@NickiMmemphis
OMG ... this whole thing is .... why she hiding her feelings .. im sure the kids would rather her be with their dad than some random guy
ReplyDeletelike i understand where shes coming from but she needa follow her heart
ReplyDeleteOh em gee. This love triangle is just...Bottom line something at that wedding needs to tear mothafuckin Damon & Nicki apart so she can "come home" That's all I'ma comment til next time :)))) Grrrreat Chap!
ReplyDeleteBITCH you tried it with these 40 comments to -____- just post my shit! kay bye! lol
ReplyDeletelmaooo IKR I was Thinking the same thing
Deleteohhhh yess did you say a book??? i already got my money ready!!!!!! lol...nicki needs to be with safaree they both want eachother i cant stand damon he needss to go and nicki need to call off this wedding cus she dont want to get married and i dont want her to.....and i know damon ol lying ass is cheating i can feel it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat chapter as always and post soon :)
My Baby! Onika, What;s Going On????!! You Want Safaree, But You're With Damon. & Martha If You Let Onika Tanya Maraj walk Down That Fucking Aisle , Im Coming After Your Ass. I Bullshit You Not. Let Ha Walk Down That Aisle, Here?! Something at that wedding needs to Go Down So, Damon & Nicki Are Apart And She Can "come home". End Of This Comment. I Can't Deal & I Won't Deal.
ReplyDelete0_0 OOP!
DeleteI'm Mad Late -_-. Ok great chapter, Nicki is so damn sad and confused and SB don't wanna be rejected and Damon don't know wtf going on and this shit is just intense.... Im not here for the wedding but bring it on i'll deal. *Sigh* Im just ready for OnikaFaree to be GREAT
ReplyDeleteMartha Martha Martha! This story is everyFUCKINGthing I am late as hell so everything that needs to be said has been but let Damon know I ain't scared to shank a BITCH!!
ReplyDeleteNow see .. Everytime I see Damon Bitch ass name pop up on this fuckin screen , I wanna slap a bitch. I DONT LIKE HIS BLACK ASS !!! he needs ta die, or somethin. where is Melanie when ya need a crazy bitch ? Ugh ! Anyways.. I am here for the damn School parking lot.. I need ta try that someday >_>. Umm I was hoping Nic was gonna get a Knife and cut Damon ass when he grabbed ha.. he betta keep it D'fuckin fuck cute. -__-. As soon as she forgave his BLACK ASS he left. fuck up wit dis Kentucky nigga? AND WHO DA FUCK IS LESLEY ! lemme see this bitch.. tbh. I think Damon is Gay .. cus he is freakin stupid. -__- umm..I AM HERE FOR "LATER THAT NIGHT" !! mhm .. I knew Faree couldnt resist that..And Nic shoulda known that her feelings for Safaree was gonna come back stronger . she set ha self up . Ion blame Safaree that much.. but that nigga needs ta fight for his WOMAN DO YOOUUUUUU HEAAAAAR MEEE?! MAKE DEM GET TOGETHA OR MY ASS IS JUMPIN IN THIS STORY AND CALLIN AWF THE WEDDIN! FOH *drops mic*
ReplyDeleteooh P.S. I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! k bye. :*
Awww NIC! :''''( Man SB needa tell her how he really feel and Nic need to cawl awf the wedding. U cant marry someone just cuz he's what is "Ideal" for ur situation. U gon end up hating him! :'( Nicki seriously mama, grow sum webos and tell Safaree how u feel.
ReplyDeleteMother, forgive me. :'(