*60+ comments on the last chapter eh? So Damon's out the picture or is he? Hmm I'll never tell! lmao hope u like if not...Fuck you foreva nigga*
The sun was shining through the big bay windows of suite 1814 of Trump Towers, but it wasn't bothering the couple occupying it. Both laid there just staring at the other in the eyes. They were connected, not in the physical sense, neither were touching the other but spiritually they were connected at the moment. The way he felt was the way she felt. Both hearts felt the same joy and pain. The two spoke with their eyes, telling what the mouth wanted but wouldn't dare.
He made contact by moving a strand of hair out of her face that was blocking his great view of her. She kissed his palm before he moved it back by his side, never once breaking eye contact.
"You're doing it again." Safaree said. Nicki adjusted in the bed they were sharing.
"What do you mean?"
"You've locked me into staring at you like we used to do." Nicki smiled.
"I'm sorry." She said still staring at him."
"You know we have to call and check on our kids."
"I know but a little longer. I don't want to hear moms mouth just yet."
"Will you be mad if i break our moment, we need to eat."
"Nooo, we can last a little longer."
"Nicki your stomach has been making noises for the past hour."
"You heard that?"
"Yeah. Let me order us some food and you go take a shower."
"Am I funky?" She raised her arm high. Safaree leaned over and sniffed.
"You've smelled better." he wrinkled his nose. She hit his chest.
"Hey, you love my funk." Nicki drew her bottom lip into her mouth smiling at him.
"Yeah I do." Safaree leaned over and pulled her into a kiss. "Go wash yo ass." He popped her on her butt and rolled out of the bed.
Nicki stretched out in the bed., still in the sweats she wore out of the church the day before. She sat up and watched Safaree move about in the front area of the suite. The urge to pee hit her so she jumped up and went into the bathroom. After releasing her bladder she washed her hands and began brushing her teeth. Still brushing she went and turned on the shower, adjusting the temperature to just below "hot as hell". Going back to the sink she rinsed her mouth out then disrobed, her thoughts went to Damon.
Safaree was out in the living room setting the small table for the food when it arrived. He went to change the sheets, he had housekeeping bring up extra sheets the night before so they wouldn't be disturbed. After tidying up the suite Safaree got undressed and decided to hop in the shower but noticed Nicki still hadn't finished up. He walked in the bathroom being hit with a cloud of steam. When he made his way to the glass shower he seen Nicki vigorously rubbing at her skin with her towel. He could here her cries. Safaree opened the shower door and watched her for a second. He reached for her but she pushed him and kept scrubbing at her skin.
"Nicki what are you doing?"
"I can still smell him on me. Make it go away, please." She said through tears. "I can't get it to go away, baby make it go away." She pushed the towel into his hands. He stood for a second trying to process what was going on. "Safaree please." She begged. He began rubbing her body with the cloth. "Harder." he scrubbed a little harder. She poured more of Safaree's body wash on the towel, that was all she had to use.
"Nicki everything is going to be okay." Safaree reassured her. He didn't want to keep going at her skin the way he was. Her skin was sensitive and she would be red all over if he kept this up. "He's gone you don't have to see him ever again." Safaree held on to her letting her know she wasn't alone, she latched on to his body.
"Don't ever leave me, please? I'll do better than last time, just please don't go." She looked up at him with the water still pouring over her head mixing in with her tears.
"I'll never leave you again. I mean that."
The Next Day
Safaree had finally convinced Nicki to go home after much back and forth. They were currently sitting in the car in front of the house. Nicki was scrolling through her phone. Every time Safaree suggested they get out she would say "One minute", they were on the 12th minute. Safaree was getting agitated because he wanted to see his kids and she was playing around. Safaree opened the door and Nicki's hand flew to his arm.
"Where are you going?" She asked.
"In the house, this is dumb. I want to see my kids."
"And you think I don't?" She let go of his arm.
"Well come on baby there is nothing to be afraid of in there. Everyone is excited to see you." He said stroking her cheek.
"How are they excited if they don't know I'm coming?" She squinted her eyes at him.
"Maybe I might have sent out a txt saying you were coming home." Nicki rolled her eyes. "But baby everyone was so worried and blowing me up asking when you were gonna come home. I had to tell them."
"It's okay babe let's go in, I wanna see my babies." she put her phone in her purse.
They got out the car and headed towards the door. Safaree took her keys and unlocked it letting her step inside first.
When Nicki walked in she heard a lot of commotion coming from the kitchen and living room area. The house looked in decent shape. All her wedding gifts were siting in front of the closet and most of the front entrance. She instantly got sad until she heard Zaria screaming her name and running towards her. Nicki dropped her purse and fell to her knees holding out her arms for an hug.
"Mommy I missed you." Zaria screamed and ran into her mothers arms.
"Not as much as I missed you baby." Nicki planted kisses all over her face.
"Mommy can I have a snack?" Zaria asked. Nicki chuckled at her daughter, she missed these moments.
"Yes baby, you can have a snack."
"So you don't love your daddy no more?" Safaree said looking hurt.
Before Zaria could answer there was a loud crash and a scream.
*Yea........well....that's the end of the preview..... Comment if you like...You know what all i usually say....Love you guys for still sticking with me even though I neglect you guys.*
Cute & Good Chapter but it kinda made me sad :( like , I hateeeeee Damon for this & he's putting her through a lot of pain . Martha please don't break them up , PLEASE !
ReplyDeleteI. Am. Going. To Kill. You -______-
ReplyDeleteI loved their little bonding moment! That was cute as hell! I wanted to help her sooo bad when she was crying over Demon I mean Damon. Hehe at ZaZa being cute and running to mommy! ^__^ now back to what I was saying. I'm going to kill you. HURRY UP AND POST GIRL! TELL ME WHAT'S GOING ON HERE!! MOOOODDDDD anxious in these streets!
I HATE YOU FOR THIS CLIFF HANGER! But I love you all the more for the preview! :* but HURRY AND POST cause this just made me way more excited than I needed to be. But you'e an amazing writer!
ReplyDeleteThank You! ^_^
Delete"Don't ever leave me, please? I'll do better than last time, just please don't go." <--- This right here just melted my heart. No more droughts pls, especially after such an intense chapter
ReplyDeleteOMFG you don't know how much I've missed reading your stories man *happy sighs* I hope that bitch Damon keep his distance, I don't want him no where near her. I hope SB keep his promise. I need more but I'll be patient :) , this is good btw, thumbs up muah!!!! Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteYesssssssssssshshshhshshshdhdhshhsjhsjsksbjhs Damion I how ever yu spell that shit is a back door bandit aintnobodygottimeforthat Onikafaree >>>> ^_^
ReplyDeletejdieheirheoeneirhdievoddb WHY DID YOU STOPPPP !!??!?!?! Wait ... WTFFFF IS GOING ON ?!?!?!?! *cries a river* I CANT WITH YOU STAY. UGHHHH Post soon. Love you.
ReplyDeleteWhat the hell broke?? And Awww at their staring moment..Only way Demon better make an appearance is at the court house or in the fucking grave
ReplyDeleteSooooooo you're just gonna leave the preview like that? Ok, I gotchu hurry with the full post please! Btw I felt bad when she was in the shower cause for some reason I could picture it and yeah
ReplyDeleteyou're a whore for leaving us with a cliffy! Lmfaoooo i knew you would. you write so fucking well i can picture everything that happens. it plays out in my mind. is that weird? well, idc. you almost made me cry. really, i was on the brink of tears :/ Lol
ReplyDeleteNo it's not weird. That's how I want you to see it! I wanted to pull that emotion, so i'm happy with it!
DeleteThey're sooo cute ^_^
ReplyDeleteAww at her in the shower :/ they'll be ok though. Damn you for leaving with this big ass cliff hanger!! :( :/ >:/
This was cute and sad at the same time. Fuck damien and his dumb ass, hope his fire burns! Not here for the cliff hanger tho! Post soon! Xoxo
ReplyDeleteAYEEEEEEEEEEE. Cant wait to read the rest ! Niggas over here already gettin emotional lmfaooooo.
ReplyDeleteugh. Whats going on? I need answers. Zaria cute tho. F ski gfxnkyfvkufc hi ffn THERE BACK TOGETHER!! Yayy!! post soon.
ReplyDeleteBitch!! How you end it at the cute bonding reuniting with the children part!!! N then put n a loud ass crash n scream -_- I know nobody betta had broke Nicki good China! Ugh can't stand you
ReplyDeleteOh and I really felt for her when she was in the shower!! I was like *emotion n tears* its gonna b ok NICKI!! Gworl we here for you!!
Hurry Up n Post!! *asian lady voice from Don't be a menace*
Lmaoooooooooooo @ you wanting 60+ comments for this little bitty ass preview. You killllllll me mawthuh. Lol. But awwww @ the shower scene. Made me wanna cry. Ugh. Zaria's lil fat self is toooo cute. Lol. & why u always gotta leave cliff hangers >______< - DeJaunna
ReplyDeleteNOooooooo i was sayin you guys reached 60+ comments on the last chapter! lmaooo I wud never ask for that much for this... I didn't even ask for any!
DeleteGrrr at the cliffs, but thank you so much for posting this preview!! It's amazing so far, AS ALWAYS!! I'm here for the moment they had at the beginning...Onikafaree is back yeaaa!! I'm still pissed at Damon though, like..Nicki in the little shower scene made me sad. :/// Hmm..I wonder what's about to happen now!! I'm so ready for the full chapter! Great preview! Can't wait!! ^__^
ReplyDeleteYOOOOOO I HATE U FOR THAT ENDING!! I'M SO HAPPY YOU POSTED. I WAS REALLY GOING THROUGH WITHDRAWLS :l if Safaree leaves her... *crushes water bottle* please don't!!!! lol, you know I Love this story.
ReplyDeleteCliff hanger?!?!?!?! Please post soon!!! :)
ReplyDeleteLmaooooooooooooooo so I'm like literally on skype with my twifey and I get to the end and Zaria greedy ass asking for a snack. Lmaoooooooo smh bypass all them niggas in the house to ask ha mama fa a damn snack. Mi SOD :( Lol at I can still smell him on me. Smh gon scrub ha damn skin off. She in there scrubbing like she got OCD forreal tho
ReplyDeleteFuck you and your whole entire like for not posting anything in 13 years. I'm pissed at you but since I want the next chapter I'm about to write a long ass comment.
ReplyDeleteOk first yea bitches Onikafaree is back but maybe not as strong as before. The first scene was adorable like them staring at eachother without touch was cute and you wrote that part with amazing detail it was easy to understand and I didn't have to go and dig for clues thank ya! 2nd wow Nic is lik traumatized from this whole Damon situation. The way you wrote this part with so much imagery was fab. Lik I could get the picture in my head of how everything went down with just what you gave us. 3rd when they were in the car I'm wondering what else was holding her back from going in that house... Ok so what happend at the end with all that spooky ass cliff hanger bull shit you pull all the time. Good ass writer is what you are. I WANT MORE I NEED MORE CRAVE IT FOR LUNCH AND DINNER!!! Not breakfast tho can't read in the morning lol but yea post soon really enjoyed this and I'm looking forward to these next chapters. Oh yea from now on I will be commenting like this on your story. So u feel u aren't doin this for nothing love ya martha MUAH!!!
Awww thank you Lexi! I'm glad you guys are getting the imagery, that's what im striving to do better in. So i know i'm on the right track now. Glad you are still enjoying the story! And thanks for the detailed comment!
DeleteI loved this preview , ready for the chapter , glad u lettin' Onikafaree be great again ! DEAD @ Zaria askin for a snack like dot ! lol I hope Damon dickhead ass don't come back ! Uggh ! He irks my soul ! Well anyways post soon ! I wish you would stop waitin so damn long 2 post !lol -NickiDopeAF
ReplyDeleteAwwww this was soo sweet .. I love how they just go right into things kinda like nothing happen but still nicki is hurt SB is gonna always be there .. Better than last time ... But Martha bitch you leavin nigga on a clifff .. It's prolly nothin doe just to keep us hype lmaoooooo but I love it POST SOON ... IDC bout no 60 comments lol
ReplyDeleteYay, u posted! Omg! That shower scene just...my heart. Ugh. :(( Zaria sure do love her damn stomach! What was that crash?!?! So excited! Amazing preview. Full chapter soon pretty please? :)
ReplyDeleteFUCK DAMON!!! Got my boo puttin all'at pressure on her delicate skin. I hate that Nigga!!
ReplyDeleteAwe they cute... staring at each othr like that.. *big smile*... You better keep em that way (together)!!
Lol @Zaria.. always want a snack.... O_O loud crash and scream?!
-____________- Martha!! Ima need that whole chapter playboy. How u gon end rght there?! Like that?!
Great preview! =) Post like now!
Onikafaree Lives once again!!!!
ReplyDeleteOmg you don't know how much I needed BTY in my life!!! Thank you so much for updating even tho it wasn't long it was something! I'm so freaking happy they're back together they're so cute especially when they soul stare at each other! I feel bad for NIC tho she is constantly reminded of tht bastard even the smell SMH! I REALLY REALLY REALLY hope she didn't get any STD's god tht would be so sad! But the way she was acting towards going. Home made me get a flash back of how she acted before when the kids were first born I hope she dosnt go back into tht! Speaking of kids I LOVE zaria she's my fave put of the three even though they're all pressious! Anyways idk wht tht loud noise is about but everything better be ok! GREAT preview! Post soon pretty plz
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DeleteLmaoo sorry for all the spelling errors Martha!!!
DeleteAll I can really say is...I N E E D M O R E. amazing. Xo
ReplyDeleteHappy To know Nicki And SB.! Are Happy Together.! At First when Nicki Was Crying when she was bathing And Said Get It Off Me I thought She Was Para.! But Then It Just That She Doesn't Want Damion's(whatever his name is) scent on her. I wonder why nick was so nervous to go home. And I'm glad nicki is happy to see her children. And I wonder what happened that ppl were screaming.?!
ReplyDeleteOmg, your writing skills... growl. You mad talented!
ReplyDeleteBut anywho, that shower scene had me near TEARS! DEADASS!
Likkkkee, awww she still hurting, i can't deal...
&& WTF crashed & screamed?? Plz, don't let it be nuffin to tragic. Nicki couldn't handle it!
Anyways, Please post soon!
-NOLA
Awwww at Nic in the shower about to rub her damn skin off :( BUT GSJSCDJVDJDBDDHDKSVKSSJGDJFD WHY DID YOU STOP?! *falls to floor and cries* please update soon! I'm feenin to see what happened next!
ReplyDeleteBut great preview! :)
ReplyDelete-_____________________________- I was so into it then I saw the freaking purple writing and I was like GAAAAAAAAAH. This was so cute, I LOVEEEEE the beginning. It was kind of emotional too, like the part in the shower. I could feel her pain, great PREVIEW :|||| Post soon!
ReplyDeleteYUSSSSS! I live for when you update. Lmfaooo. k so.. I loveeeeeeeee when they just look at each other, without saying anything.. mad mad cute. The shower part, made me tear up.. urgh Damon. I hate him.. My Nic's hurting :/ Zeaaaad at Zaria asking for a snack, as soon as Nic went into the house. & what's that loud crash and scream?! o_O This preview was poppin! I want the whole thing tho.. post sooooooon! I wanna see what happens next!
ReplyDeleteBiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitch u tried that cliff hanga
ReplyDeleteGreat** chapter! I love the cuteness of nicki an safaree! Oh lord..what was the scream;( post soon!! Xx
ReplyDeleteDamnnnnnnnm the kid finally got an update??!!! Verd??? I thought if NEVER see this day. I'm too geeked :-D idc if it was a paragraph, I am openly accepting this....I been feigning at least a paragraph for this past month...tuh! I'm out here..*dances* ^______^ ayyeeeee ~(^___^)>
ReplyDeleteThe way you started it off was FUCKING BOMB, man....so DOPE. The imagery was so fucking vivid. It was like a movie in my head as I'm reading...I appreciate your reading that much more when it's vivid...
The way Nic and Safaree had the stare down is POPPIN! I love it! So ONIKAFAREE like... Damn that Lil shower scene was heart wrenching...Smh it saddens me. The fact that she can't bear this situation is all the more hurtful and then Safaree feels basically helpless...*sighs* very intense..I hate Damon. Ugh yo, when Nic and Safare were in the shower and he promised not to ever leave>>>> yo I legit shed a tear out here in these streets.
Why was Nic stalling to go in the house? What was she on her phone doing? I need answers. Awe zaria missed her mommy. Awe. She ran to her. Dead at her asking for a snack as Soon as Nic get there lol. Greedy. Ayeeee and wtf was that noise?! Scream and crash?!?!!!! I need answers...good post though, update soon.
-@MinajFanDetroit
:(((( The shower scene made me sad :/ aaaaaaaawwwww @ Zaria running to her mommy! And how is there shit goin on already! She just got back! :/ Post SOON PLEASE! >_>
ReplyDeleteOMG! I wanted to cry when I was reading the part when she was in the shower. :( but I loved this chapter. Please Post Soon! :)
ReplyDeleteDAMM! i was waiting for you to update -_-
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Yes there back together!!!
i love safaree hes so perfect for her
...dam its sad that nicki was having an episode in the shower, if i scrub to hard my skin gets raw and sore
i hope she dosnt have another melt down...she need counseling because that can make anyone crazy
man i can understand not wanting to come in, because when something really embarrassing happens in front of everyone you dont really want to see them lol
one time i snuck out to the park, my mom pulled up, jumpped out the car and started smacking me in front of everyone...i didnt go back to that park for a month
ANYWAYS...
I freakin LOVE those babbies! they are so adorable.
A loud crash? either melanie broke in or ethan fell and broke his arm... or damon broke in...HOPE not
No wait y I feel like it was one of my babies yo ima cry.... I hope my babies ok.... Ugh with yo arse I'll never know iont like it pineapples
ReplyDeleteCrash? Hmmmmmmmmmm? Listen, if someone end up in the hospital we fighting k? k. lol. . . but good post :)
ReplyDeletegoshh i been waiting for dis .. please tell me Damons out da pictuion and Nicki Safaree can be a happy family for once :)
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