Friday, May 11, 2012

Wedding Bells...

*Well we made it, here is what you guys haven't been waiting for. Enjoy.*


The downstairs of Nicki's home was lively for a Saturday morning. Today was her big day, she was getting married. Her mom and Safaree's mom were getting all the bridesmaids in the hair and make-up chairs. Martin was on the phone taking care of business. It looked like the scene from a movie, girls walking around have dressed talking, laughing and drinking mimosas.  It was only 9am so the mothers decided to let Nicki sleep in but it was about time for her to get up and start getting ready, she had to be at the church at noon. The triplets were in the upstairs hallway trying to figure out what they should do.

"Nana said leave her alone." Zaria pleaded.

"But he said to go talk to her." Daria reached for the doorknob but Ethan pushed her hand.

"We gonna get in trouble." Ethan whispered.

"Stop being a scaredy cat." Daria taunted.

"I am not."

"Come on then." she looked at him. Ethan knew he wasn't but he didn't want to be a scaredy cat.

"Okay." he agreed. Zaria had no choice she was going where ever they were at.

Daria twisted the doorknob and opened the door up. They all looked at the bed and seen a small lump in the bed buried under the plush comforter. The three tip toed over and used the foot stool to climb onto the bed.

"Where is she?" Zaria whispered to Daria, she just shrugged her shoulders.

"We should go back to our room." Ethan said looking at the lump.

Zaria found the edge of the comforter and pulled it back a little revealing her mothers face. She put her finger up to her mouth and "shh" the other two. She pulled it back enough where it would stay. They got a little closer and just stared at her not knowing what to do. Ethan moved a piece of her hair out of her face, he thought his mommy was the prettiest mommy in the world.

"Wake her up." Daria told Zaria.

"You do it." she snapped back.

All of a sudden Nicki grabbed them all and they screamed as loud as they could. Nicki laughed at them, she had been up when they opened the door. She began tickling them which sent them into a fit of giggles.

"What are you three up to?" She asked but they were still laughing. "Answer me." she hit them with her pillow.

"Mommy stop." Ethan giggled out.

"Mommy? Wait are these my children?" She picked Zaria up and stared at her hard. "Well you look like my baby girl." She picked up Ethan's leg and smelled his foot. "Yeah you smell like my Ethan." she acted like his foot stunk.

"Heyyy." He said pouting.

"Mommy's just playing. Give me my kisses you guys, I've missed you." They all tried to hug her at once.

"I seen you when I went to sleep." Daria said sitting in Nicki's lap.

"That was a whole 10 hours ago." Nicki kissed her cheek. "I love you guys, did you know that?"

"Yes." They answered.

"What were you three up to?" she ran her hand over Ethan's head.

"Nothing, we wanted to see you."

"Mommy I seen your dress." Zaria said smiling.

"You did? Is it as pretty as the day you saw it?" Zaria shook her head yes. "It is? Well then mommy is going to look pretty today then huh?"

"You always look pretty." Daria said.

"Aw thank you mommies baby."

"Mommy where is daddy?" Ethan asked.

Nicki didn't know what to tell him. She knew that Safaree had called and talked to the kids for the last two days but no one knew where he was at.

"He had to go away for a little while but he'll be back baby." was all she could come up with, she silently prayed that he would come back soon.

"Will he be at the wedding?" Zaria asked.

"Maybe." she said forcing a smile. "Let's watch some cartoons." She gave Ethan the remote. They settled in and watched Spongebob. Nicki heard her mothers voice in the hallway.

"I know they didn't go wake her up." the triplets looked at each other and slid down in the bed under the covers. Nicki looked at them and was about to ask them what was going on when her mom came in with a tray of food. "Are those three in here?" Nicki glanced at the bed and saw Zaria shake her head no.

"Um no haven't seen them, you lost my kids ma?" Nicki pointed at the bed and her mom put the tray on the nightstand.

"I guess I did, well I guess we will have to send all of Zaria's clothes and give Daria and Ethan's toys and balls to the homeless children." Mrs.Carol said.

Zaria was the first up out of the bed.

"Noooo not my clothes." She ran out the room with the other two hot on her trail.

"Oh they're they go." her mom said. Nicki laughed and put the tray over her legs.

"Is this mine?" she bit a piece of bacon.

"If it wasn't you sure don't care."

"Sure don't this is my house." She smiled. "Sit with me mommy." Her mom crawled in the bed and sat next to her.

"So how are you feeling baby?"

"I'm ready." She said stuffing her face.

"You don't sound excited."

"Ma please don't start, I'm excited." Nicki didn't want to hear her mouth this early in the morning.

"I'll leave it alone. I just want to see my baby happy." Mrs. Carol stared at her at she ate her food. "Well I got to get back down stairs, those girls will sit and drink all morning if you let them."

"Alright, if you wouldn't mind can you take this back. I'm about to get in the tub. Tell Terrence to be ready for me in a hour. And tell Lauren and Candi to bring the dress in here and hang it in my closet. Oh and-" Mama Carol cut her off.

"Onika I'm not your personal assistant." and with that she left. Nicki knew she would do what she asked. She went and started her bath water. While brushing her teeth she made a couple f mental notes to take of before she left for the honeymoon. She spit in the sink and turned off the sink. Disrobing she got in the hot water and soaked for a bit. She wanted to here from Safaree, she needed him to tell her everything would be okay. She felt tears falling down her cheek, they were quickly wiped away she was sick of crying. She washed her body and got out. Nicki went into the bedroom to dry off and lotion up.

Safaree
How could she love him more than me? I love her more than he ever could. She's supposed to be my fairy tale ending not his. We are supposed to get married and raise our kids as a complete family. Safaree stared at the ceiling in the same clothes he was wearing at the rehearsal dinner. He was at the Trump in a suite about two hours away from the church Nicki was getting married at. He wanted to see his kids but he knew he would have to see her and he didn't know if he could handle it. He knew Zaria and Daria would be just as beautiful as their mother in their flower girl dresses. And Ethan in his identical tux to Safaree's. He needed to talk to someone. His cell had died two days ago and he didn't have his charger so he used the hotel phone to call his mother. When she picked it sounded as if it was a party going on.

"Hello." she answered.

"Ma."

"Safaree is that you?"

"Yeah it's me."

"Hold on let me go to a different room." He heard the commotion fade. "Okay, baby where are you?"

"I'm fine mom. How are the kids?"

"You would know if you were here."

"Ma please don't start, how are they?"

"Nicki said they asked about you earlier and she didn't know what to tell them. You need to come here and talk out whatever is going on between you two."

"There is only one way this can be worked out and she's not willing to do it."

"Safaree if you are talking about the little affair you two have been having for the past two months I know about it and so does Carol."

"What? How did you find out?" he stood up shocked.

"Boy we are your mothers and the way you two acted around each other we knew something was up. It took us a minute to figure it out but we seen you two come out of the closet together fixing your clothes at one of the get togethers. But we're not talking about that, Safaree you love that girl. Get here and tell her before it's to late."

"Mom she doesn't love me back, she wants Damon and I'm not going to stand in her way."

"You and I both know that's bullshit. She loves you, you just to pig headed to see. Safaree she's scared to put her feelings out there for you first, you left her." she slightly yelled.

"And I regret ever doing it ma but she acts like she could care less about how I feel." Safaree yelled becoming angry that his mother was taking her side. "Why are you so concerned about her? You don't care that I'm hurt."

"Of course I care Safaree, I never want my baby boy hurting. But Nicki has been in my life a long time, she's like my daughter. I just want you both to be happy, baby come by the house." his mom pleaded. Safaree wasn't trying to hear that.

"Naw I'm good where I am ma. I'll just talk to you later, give my babies a kiss for me and tell them I love them. I love you mom." He hung up the phone.

Safaree went over the conversation with his mom in his head. His mom acted like he wasn't afraid to love her just like she supposedly afraid to love him. She put him through a lot, he had a reason for his actions three years ago. He went and got in the shower to relieve some of the tension in his body.

Damon

Damon sat in his hotel in uptown New York going over his vows. He was as nervous as a whore in the church house for a couple of reasons. He was scared about marrying Nicki and the fact that Martin had taken Nicki's financial records to an accountant. He hoped he had went back far enough and made changes to where they didn't find the fraud. He loved Nicki and didn't want to go through with his plan but he was in to deep now, he had to finish it. He sat staring at the diamond wedding band he was going to slip on her finger in a couple of hours. He needed his best friend there with him but he knew that couldn't happen.

Nicki
She sat in the chair while Day put the finishing touches on her make-up, she kept fidgeting in her seat. Nicki had a feeling that something was going to happen today. Her imagination was getting the best of her, she took a deep breath while Day stroked her cheek with a brush. She had just gotten a text from Damon saying that Phil wouldn't be able to make it because he had to fly back to Kentucky for an emergency. This annoyed Nicki because he was supposed to be paired with Lauren and now she had no one. Terrence was putting more pins in the bun on top of her head. When he was done he decided to wait to insert the flower on the side of the bun.

"Okay all done." Terrence said standing back looking at his work.

"Me too." said Day. "Take a look." Day handed her a mirror.

Nicki stared at her reflection and marveled at the great job the two had done.

"Thanks you guys, you're the best team ever. I guess it's time for the dress, Lauren can you get it for me?" Lauren went and brought the dress out the closet. Terrence and Day packed up their things and left out so she could get dressed, Lauren stayed to help her.

Nicki disrobed and stepped into her dress, Lauren zipped it in the back. Both went to adjusting and making sure it looked right on her. Nicki kept fixing her breast in the dress, she didn't want a malfunction to happen on her way down the aisle in the church.

"How do I look?" Nicki turned to Lauren.

"You look amazing."

"Is my hair and everything still fine? Did I get make-up on the dress?" Lauren held her friends hand.

"Everything is fine, calm down." She smiled at Nicki. "Just worry about getting down that aisle." Nicki took a deep breath.

"Lauren I'm scared." Nicki confessed.

"All brides get nervous, it's natural." There was a knock at the door then Mrs. Carol appeared.

"Are you almost ready Nicki?"

"Yes ma'am. Are the kids dressed?"

"Yes they are taken care of and sitting on the couch like the good children they are. And you better hurry up, Z-bear is having a fit."

"Why?"

"She wants to see you in the dress." Nicki smiled.

"Tell her I'll be down in five minutes."

"Okay baby." her mom hugged her. "You look beautiful."

"Thank you mom." she left the room. "Lauren can you go get T and tell him to come put the flower in my hair so we can leave?"

"Sure."

Nicki sat on her bed taking the little time she had to clear her mind. She kept hearing all the negative stuff people have said about her and the marriage. She just wanted peace in her life and she felt like she would get that today at the alter. Terrence cam in the room.

"Can you do me a favor?" Nicki asked as he grabbed the flower.

"Depends."

"Can you stand in for Phil as Damon's best man so it will be even." Terrence looked at the distress on her face.

"It would be my honor to be in the Queens wedding." He said smiling.

"Thank you T, what would I do without you?"

"Wearing that same crimped black and pink hair." they laughed together.

Hour & Half Later

Nicki stood at the back of the church as Carla prepped the wedding party. She was fixing a couple strands of Daria's hair. The kids were jittery and Nicki was getting agitated because they were never like this. On the way over to the church it was like they're whole mood changed. Ethan started screaming he wanted his daddy, Daria was trying to come out of her dress claiming it was itchy, and Zaria just had a really bad attitude. Nicki needed Safaree but as usual he had ran like a little boy when things didn't go his way.

"Alright people, get in order. We are about to begin, Nicki can you get the children under control?" Carla asked then whispered something in her mic.

"I'm trying." Nicki knelt down in front the triplet's. "Okay you guy's you have to behave and be the angels mommy knows you can be. Ethan here's your pillow, please don't drop it baby. You two remember to stay together."

"I don't want to do it no more mommy." Ethan said trying to give her back the pillow.

"Please don't do this to mommy Ethan, I need you to be a big boy."

"Where's daddy?" He whined.

"I don't know Ethan." She snapped at him and regretted it immediately as she seen his eyes water. It wasn't his fault. She pulled him to her and hugged him. "I'm sorry baby but can you please do this for mommy?" She felt him shake his head yes. "Thank you." she stood him up straight and fixed his tux. "Are you okay girls?" she grabbed each of their hands.

"Yes mommy." Daria said.

"Nicki are we ready?" Carla asked.

"Yes." She stood up and put the kids in front of her. "We can start." Nicki moved back to the side so that no one would see her before time.

"And cue music." Carla whispered into the mic.

The music began and the doors opened and the processional started with Iesha and Rex leading. Nicki watched as one by one her friends disappeared into the sanctuary. Next thing she knew Ethan was up next to enter, he looked back at her terrified of all the people inside the church. Nicki gave him a thumbs up and he began walking. Carla cued the girls to start walking when Ethan made it half way down the aisle. When they began the doors closed so she could get into position. Nicki inhaled and took the bouquet from Carla.

"This is what we worked for, let's do this." Nicki whispered to herself then nodded to Carla.

"Cue music."

When the guest heard the Wedding March play that all stood and the doors opened revealing Nicki. She began moving down the aisle looking over all the faces, some she knew, some she would get to know. She looked ahead at Damon who was smiling big, Nicki smiled back. She made it to the alter and he helped her step up. She got herself situated then gave the preacher the go ahead.

"Dearly Beloved, we are gathered here in the sight of God and in the presence of these witnesses, to join Damon and Onika in holy matrimony, which is an honorable estate, instituted of God in the time of man's innocence, signifying to us the mystical union which is between Christ and His Church. Which holy estate Christ adorned and beautified with His presence at the first miracle which He wrought in Cana of Galilee; and is commended of the Apostle Paul to be honorable among all men, and is therefore not to be entered into lightly or inadvisable, but reverently, discreetly, and in the fear of God. Into which holy estate Damon and Onika come now to be joined and to unite two hearts and lives, blending all interest, sympathies, and hopes. I charge and entreat you, therefore, in entering upon and sustaining this hallowed union, to seek the favor and blessing of Him whose favor is life, whose blessing make the rich and addeth no sorrow. Let us now seek His blessing." Preacher Turner began praying.

"And let the church say Amen."

"Amen." everyone said in unison.

Nicki and Damon looked at each other, Damon gave her a wink and gave his focus back to the preacher.

"If anyone objects to this marriage, speak now or forever hold your peace." The preacher asked. He waited a minute or so. "Okay we-"

"I object." Came from four different areas of the church. Mrs. Carol, Mrs. Davenport, Some man in shades that no one could make out, and the last from Safaree at the back of the church.

Nicki turned around to look at all of them but locked eyes with Safaree. Martin was helping him tuck in his shirt and getting him into his suit jacket. Safaree called Martin and told him what he needed to do and Martin was more than happy to help. Safaree did 100 on the highway getting to the church.

"What?" Damon asked.

"Well I've never had this happen before. Well what's the reasoning, Mrs. Carol." Nicki broke from Safaree's gaze and looked her mother in the eye.

"Onika you're my only daughter and I've let you make your mistakes so you can learn from them but this marriage I feel is a mistake and I can't let you do it. You don't love this man and you never will love him the way you are supposed to love your husband. I can't say I know where your heart resides that only you can say. Marriage is a forever commitment, are you sure you can make that to him?" Nicki looked over at Damon who had a baffled look on his face then back to her mom. "That's it, I've said my peace. It is now up to you baby." Mrs. Carol said.

"Son?" The preacher was gesturing towards Safaree. "What's your reason?"

"I love her." the crowd began to gasp and whisper to each other.

"What the hell Safaree?" Damon yelled walking towards Safaree with clenched fist but Rex, Wayne, and Baby stood in front of him letting him know it would be none of that.

"I'm sorry Damon." He looked around at all the eyes on him, it was now or never. "Nicki you're supposed to be mine wife not his. And I won't sit back and watch him take the only woman besides my mother who has ever just loved me for me, no judgment. We have always been there for each other. I can't imagine my life without you, ever since we were kids I saw you in my future as old people together." he walked up to her. "I need you and I know you need me. No more running away from our problems, I'll stay until we have an understanding. I love you and I can't see myself without you Onika. I know whatever you need I can do for you. I can be all the man you need baby please don't marry him, I'm the one you want the one you need." Safaree grabbed her hand. "Baby please. I can't guarantee I won't ever hurt you because I'm not perfect but I can promise I will spend everyday after trying to make it up to you. Just give me a chance Nicki."

Nicki had tears coming down her cheek, she had never seen him this vulnerable  in front of so many people. Nicki wiped the one tear that managed to escape his ducts. She began to speak but was cut off.

"Well that's cute and everything but can i give my reason." the man with the shades on said.

Damon's head snapped in his direction quickly. Nicki looked at the, his voice sounded familiar but she couldn't place it. Everyone turned and gave him the attention he asked for.

"And who are you sir?" the preacher asked.

"Phil." Nicki said confused. She thought Damon said he couldn't make it. He smirked at her.

"I'm Phil, Damon's best friend and Lover." The church was once again filled with gasps and whispers. Damon's eyes grew wide.

Nicki stood in shock at Phil's confession, she had a blank expression on her face. She never put two and two together, neither seemed liked the type.

"His..his what?" Nicki asked.

"You heard me right his lover."

"Shut up Phil."

"NO Damon! That's the reason your in this mess your in now, marrying some girl you don't love." Phil shouted. Damon looked at Nicki but she wouldn't look at him.

"I love her."

"That's the problem. You were never supposed to catch feelings, you were supposed to stick to the plan."

"Plan?" Nicki and Safaree said looking at Damon.

"I didn't want to do it anymore but he blackmailed me, you were never supposed to find out Nicki."

"What plan Damon?" Nicki yelled. Damon just looked at the ground.

"You're so pathetic." Phil said with disgust. "The plan was for him to marry you, embezzle money and leave you after six months. But he started carrying for you, so it took us a minute but we got the money."

"The $500,000." Nicki said out loud. "How could you?" She asked Damon. "How long have you been sleeping with him?"

"Since college. When he met you we were going through a rough patch, and you just wouldn't go away. But you didn't have what it took to please him and that's when he came crawling back to my bed." Nicki felt sick.

"Oh my God, you've slept with me and him. Do you have something?" She looked at Damon.

"No Nicki." Damon shook his head

"You sick bastard." Safaree ran towards him but was held back by Wayne, and Mack.

Nicki fell to her knees crying. She felt sick to her stomach, the possibility of her having HIV or AIDS made her stomach churn. She looked up and the whole church was staring at her, she felt like a goldfish in a fish bowl.

"Safaree." She said barely above a whisper. Safaree was still trying to get to Damon. "Safaree. Safaree. Safaree." She yelled his name finally getting his attention. "Get me out of here." Safaree went and picked her up and walked swiftly to the back of the church and out the doors. He found a room and took Nicki inside it locking them in. He stood her up and she began pacing. "I'm hot Safaree." She start pulling at the the necklace around her neck, she ripped it off. "Safaree get the dress of me please." She was crying hysterically at this point. Safaree searched for the zipper when he found it it only went down a fraction of the way.

"It's stuck."

"Rip it." She yelled out. Safaree grabbed each side and tore the dress apart. Nicki hurriedly got out of it and knelt down holding herself. Safaree was trying to process all that happened. Someone began pounding on the door.

"Nicki I need to talk to you." Damon yelled out. Safaree became angry and charged the door.

"Safaree please...no." he stopped in his tracks. "Hold me please." he went back and picked her up and sat on the couch holding her tight. "What if I have-"

"Shhh, don't worry. We'll go get tested together, you're not alone baby. I need you to calm yourself." He kissed her forehead. They sat there blocking out all the commotion going on on the other side of the door. Neither knew what would happen from here on out but both knew they couldn't be without the other.

*Soooo, what did you think? Did I do good? Should I continue or leave it here? I really need you to comment and give me your thoughts, no half ass comments please. Some of you alluded to what you thought he was hiding, which pissed me off! lmao The preachers part in the wedding we all know I didn't write, so no smart comments about it. lol Anywho, I hope I didn't disappoint you guys. DO NOT SPEAK ABOUT THIS CHAPTER ON THE TL. Well until next time maybe, Smooches*

70 comments:

  1. HOOOOLLLLLYYYY FUCKKKIIINNGGGGGG SHIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

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  2. OHHH MYYY GAAAWWWDDDD!!!!!!!! This was just...OH MY GAWD!! Too fucking crazy man!!! That piece of shit better have not given Nicki anything, my poor baby!! How could he? Omg omg omg. I'm like an addict, I NEED MORE! Wtf is gonna happen next? AMAZING JOB ONCE AGAIN BOO! Xoxo

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  3. Ygghgghgguuggfgbvcfv YASSSSSSS & NOOOOOOOO ! Thank you ! I knew it ! I didn't know he was gay but I knew he was Lyin ! ONIKAFAREE ! Yassssss ! Even my babies knew something wasn't right . YASSSSSS . Please continue ! PLEASE ! I'm begging you ! & she better not have nothin tho . I'd beat any nigga who name is Damon ass . IDC . Great chapter .

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  4. Omfg .. iDead Ass Have Tears In My Eyes .. How Could Damon Do Something Like That?? Im Glad Safaree Came To The Wedding .. Now Nicki , SB & The Triplets Can Be A Real Family .. Please Dont Let Nicki Have ANY Type Of Disease! Ugh iCant STAND DAMON!! Anyway Great Chapter .. <3 Post Soon ^__^

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  5. My babies Daria zaria & Ethan are so cute......that whole Wedding church scene was tragedy I knew Damon was no good and he was On the low seeing another man Trying to Marry her for her money omg how could he do that to Nic i hope Safaree Beat his ass...omg i literally shred tears when SB Objected them getting married i knew he would come around...that last Paragraph touch my heart like tears was streaming down my face I hope she didnt catch nothing... Amazing Chapter Post soon xoxo

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  6. uhbsuehbxehbdyeubeuhdbyebdueybdyebeiubduiebudhendjdhcbdjhcbdcuhbcbeuhcbuehbcuhebcuhbeuhbricnrhcburhcbrhcurbcuirbcbrcbrybvuyrbvbcinecuinhreuxbibechuebucruycbruycbyurbcuyexveyuxbuwybxuyebxuyebijxnienhdcbuhbchrbvjhbcicniducndinceuceiucnuyrbcuybzauybzihwzbiubuicburvbunvkvnkjenoimpincournvuirncieucbuibcirubruinveiocoedmiciurbiuvbiurncioempsomoienduiruirnirunckjemxoiemionunvuinviurnviuvnriuvn!!!!!!! HOLY SHIT! SHIT JUST GOT THE FUCK REAL. WHAT? ewwww :/ that nasty liddle fucker. WTF? atleast they stopped the wedding...

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  7. You did great! That was an unpredictable twist, I didn't expect him to be gay. Ol nasty bastard. Something about him never sat well with me. Thank God the wedding was stopped and Safaree told her how he felt. I hope she doesn't have any diseases. You should continue though, you can't leave us hanging! Ph, may I add that the moment when they went to wake her up was so adorable? But yeah, I need to see how this plays out.

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  8. OMFG I'M SPEECHLESS, this whole time i thought Damon was cheatin w/ his assistant, like woooooow i'm friggin shocked.... omg can you please post like in 10 minutes lmaooo like wooow. i hope nic doesn't have anything cuz i will virtually kick damon's ugly ass ughhh omg

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  9. OMG Martha this is AMAZING you should continue you have real talent and i LOVE it. You never dissapoint this is how i was hoping this would happen. Now we need to know about Safaree and Nicki being together!and Nicki NOT! having anything

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  10. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!! ARE YOU FUCKIN SERIOUS!!!!!!! NIC BETTER NOT CATCH NOTHIN FROM HIS NASTY ASS!!!!!

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  11. OMFG!!!!! YASSSSSSSS ONIKAFAREE LIVES! I Love those damn triplets and Mama Beezy staning for Onikafaree! Yoooo Damon is fucking faggot :o like I never saw that comming. I just hope Nicki is okay. Safaree was a damn G walking in there and objecting like that, I loved it. BEST chapter ever

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  12. LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OMFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG HIS ASS WAS GAAAAAAAAAAAY THE WHOLE FUCKING TIME! THIS MIGHT BE BAD TO SAY BUT I'M FUCKING HAPPY IT'S ALL OUT IN THE OPEN CUZ A BITCH COULDN'T TAKE ANYMORE SADNESS. AWWWWWWWWWW THE KIDS WERE NOT FEELING THIS WEDDING SHIT EITHER EH... I LITERALLY BURST OUT LAUGHING WHEN MAMA CAROL ASS OBJECTED! I WAS LIKE DAMN HA OWN MAMA SMH! SB SHOUDLA TAGGED THAT NIGGA ASS FOR POPPING SHIT AND I'M TALKING BOUT PHIL. I THINK YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THIS SHIT IS A BASKETBALL GAME CUZ IT GETS NIGGAS HYPE AS FUCK. YOU SHOULDA SEEN HOW FAST I RAN TO THIS FUCKING LAP TOP!!!!!! MY POOR NIC, BUT HEY AT LEAST SHE FOUND THIS SHIT OUT BEFORE SHE SAID I DO.

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  13. Hallelujah! Hallelujah Jesus! Yes Lord. Damon is gone! Safaree is back! They are back! Yes Lord! Hallelujah! *sigh* Hallelujah.

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  14. I was like thank the Lord Jesus when they objected. Can't believe their mothers knew all along and didn't say anything. That's kinda cool lol. TF tho, I never would've guessed that Damon was gay WOW!!!He better not have given her nothing cause...So happy that Safaree decided to come back. GREAT CHAPTER so CONTINUE and POST SOON!!!

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  15. BUt like you woke me up out of my happ ass dream about Nicki and have me literaally crying!!!

    WTF Martha?! WTAF?!!!

    ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS?!!!! That NIGGA!! That... that slimy ass mutherfucker!!!!

    She betta be ok Martha!! She BETTER BE OK!!! CAUSE IF SHE NOT... You know what I aint even gonna go there cause she's fine. Everything is gonna be fine!! *breathes*

    *grabs Damon by his throat* Nigga I been waitin to put your ass to rest!! How fucking dare you!! How dare you!! You disgust me!! *spits in his face* You had the nerve to be fucking another man!! You had the fucking nerve to disrespect this beautiful woman right here *points @ Nicki*!! You exposed her kids to your fuckery!!! And you were bold enough to actually think you could fucking get away with it!!! *slams his head against the wall* You thought wrong mutherfucker!!! *slams head again* and for everyday you disrespected her Ima fucking torture you a different fucking way!! Ima pull your teeth out one bye one, cut your fucking eyelids off. Ima Put a needle in every fucking pore in your skin for all the shit you did, pull your fingernails and toenails out your skin slowly one by one and then ima let you sit with your hands and feet in containers of acid and ima sit and watch you suffer!!

    No one and I mean no fucking one is gonna disrespect Onika Tanya Maraj the way you have and get away with it!!! *slams head into wall again, lets go of his throat and walks away*

    *breathes and chants* I need to calm down!! Remember it is just a story Dayshia, just a story! *breathes and chants* Find your happy place.

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  16. On another note, Finally things can get back to the way they were =)

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  17. Yoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo djbjdksjxjskwnjdizjxskajisknhsndbjxhsx. Woah. Ok. First, FUCK PHIL AND DAMON! I really wasn't expecting him to be gay. Woah. YAASSS at Mamma Carol objecting too! Lol I loved that. Finally Safaree said everything he needed to. That was the sweetest thing in the entire world aaaawwww :'). Even my babies was on edge. They KNEW. Just....ugh. I mean....Damon said he didn't have anything so...hopefully neither does Nic. This is so bitter sweet :/ I could see Nic freaking out tryna get out the dress so vividly in my head :( Of course i'm happy it's finally back to Onikafaree. You mentioned another story u wanted us to read earlier so if that's not the third part to the onikafaree series I think u should write one more closure chapter. This post was AfuckingMAZING!

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  18. HOEEEMAHHHGAWWWDD!!!!!!! OMG!! Ok. *calms self* First off, This chapter was AMAZING!! You wrote this very well!! And OF COURSE, I don't think you should stop right here. That was a good arse ending, but you should DEFINITELY continue!!

    Let me tell you somethin, mama ALWAYS knows best. The fact that both Mama Carol and Mrs Samuels knew about the affair was just>>>>>>>>>>>
    The thought of Nic in a wedding dress and walking down the aisle to her future, a new beginning, brought tears to my eyes. I can't wait until she gets married! :')
    K...back to the story!

    That Damon!!! I am pissssed!!! How could ANYONE, in their right mind, be so sick!?!?! It's one thing to just use someone for their money like that, but it's something else on a whole other level to be attracted to the same sex, and basically go experiment w/ the other and pretend to like it! >:/// FOH! Im disgusted!! You really had me fooled, thinkin Damon was over here cheating w/ some woman, but nooooo!!! Phil, his best friend!?!? Wow.

    Well we asked for it, for DamonNika to be ruined in some type of way, and there we have it. I just hate it ended like that! Like..ew, and my poor Nic!

    Moving right along though.....
    Safaree came for his woman!!!!!!! *throws confetti* I am HERE for him coming to finally express his TRUE love for Nic. Not only to her, but the whole church! ^.^
    Aww!! I'm so ready for Onikafaree to be great again!! The way he held her, and told her she wasn't alone in this, just made me so happy!!

    Safaree, Nicki, Zaria, Daria, and Ethan, all as ONE big happy family....I think I might just cry. This is about to be so great!
    *Sigh* Anywho...I hope Nicki doesn't have HIV/Aids or anything, like, I still can't believe him. She NEEDS to sue him! She HAS to!

    You are so great!! Do you have any idea!?!? I loved BM, I'm in Love w/ BTY, and I'm ready to continue this wonderful journey! Dont stop here!!!! Xoxoxoxo
    Hands down, BEST chapter. I LOVED IT!!! :))))))

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    1. Annnd...Let me NOT forget those cute liddle triplets!!! They were SO cute in the hallway going back and forth on if they should go in Nic's room or not! Like I've said many times before, Nic makes such a great mom. I love how she interacts w/ the kids. She always knows how to do and say the right things when it comes to them!!! VERY cute scene! K. My work here is done, Lol! Once again...loved this chapter!! ^__^

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  19. HOLY SHIT! This chapter was just >>>>>> AMAZING! If this bitch gave her something imma personally fuck his ass up POST SOON PLEASEEEE
    - @Niaalovesnicki_

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  20. OHHHHHHHHHHH FUCKIIIIINNNNNNN SHIITTTTTT!!!! that's all I can say.. CONTINUE DEFINITELY! POST SOON!!!!!!

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  21. THIS NIGGGA GAY!!!!! Nothing wrong with that but wow! I...cant I'm so fuckin pissed right now! If hegave Nicki ANYTHING shots bout to pop da fug off!!!!
    I cant right now...I just cant...

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  22. SON SON SON SON SONSONSON SON SONSONSONSON SON SON SON SONS OSN SONS ONS ONS ONSKSPSKSJAIABAKAJA. OMGGGGGGGG im so speechless right now i cant even write a proper comment !!! POST VERY SOON. kaaaaaaaaaay xoxoxoxoxo

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  23. WHAAAAATTT. THEEE FUUUCCCKKK. OMGGGGGGGG Pnxakfbakna phil and damon are complete cunts for playing Nicki like the smdfh, I swear if Nic has anything then Im gonna go off-key mate! Narh omgg. I KNEWWWW safaree would go to the wedding and abject and Im soooo glad he did yaaayyyyyyyyy!!!! nic and safaree belong together idc idc and I ALWAYS thought there was something noy right about Damon. it will always be Nicki and Safaree till the end!! The kids are maaaad adorable btw and yeah. pleeeeeaaase post SOOONNNN!! I fucking love this story!! Kthanksbye. -- RosieUKBarbiee

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  24. OMGGGGG!!! The holdddddd time I was thinkin it was a girl -___- nd its his bestfriend nd its a nigga?!?! Nicki better not hav anything ch. OHHHH YASSSSS! U haveeee to continue. Pleaseeee

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  25. O wow i have no comment on Damon ..but da trips are so fuckin cute omg i wish dey where real lol .. And to think HB might have ... Lawd smh great chapter Martha <3 Preezy

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  26. OMMMFFFFFGGG "DROP KICK ME JESUS" ... FIRST LET ME SAY THIS !!! MARTHA YOU ARE AHFUKKINMAZING !!!

    OKAY : THE TRIPS .. THEY ARE TOOOO CUTE FOR WORDS IM SMILIN AT THEY ACTION FOR REAL ..
    ZARIA THATS MY BABY THE LEADER
    DARIA JUST GOES WIT THE FLOW
    ETHAN IS LIKE HIS FATHER BUT HAVE HIS MAMA HEART
    MS CAROL : SHE KNOWS BEST SHE HAVE A FEELIN SHE AINT GONNA STOP TIL NICKI GET SHE ALWAYS RIGHT
    MAMA BEEZY WAS SPEAKIN THE TRUTH TO SB
    NICKI : IT WAS SOOO HARD FOR HER TO DEAL WIT ALL OF THIS (cries) SHE NEEDS SB IN HER LIFE
    SB : YEEESSSS NIGGA GLAD YOU CAME TO YO FUKKIN SENSES GET YO WOMAN COMFORT HER IM PROUD
    NOW THIS FAGGOT ASS PENCIL DICK IN THE BOOTY SUGAR ASS NIGGA ... HOW DARE YOU !!!!! LIKE I KNOW YOU DIDNT WANT IT TO HAPPEN BUT TO LATE YOU HURT NICKI SO BAD THE WORST IN HER LIFE ... YOU PROLLY INFECTED HER ALL KINDS OF SHIT
    Im just sooooo in my feelins for nicki plssss let everything be okay POST SOON AS FUKKIN POSSIBLE !!!!

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  27. WOWWW OH MY GAAAWWWWWDD!!!!!! You should CONTINUE!! why you even asking?!!!!..I at least need to know what's the results of the tests..and PLEASE I AM BEGGING..LET DAMON DIE IN A DEEP HOLE..I'm so disturbed by him seriously like never before..him and Phill can go and fuck themselves eternally in HELL. I'm here for Mama Carol objecting!!!!..You had to see my face when I read the word "lover" I waas shocked. I'm still not over it..Oh and Lool @ their moms knowing bout the affair..their freaky asses got caught.. and You now damn well you didn't dissapoint us this was AMAZING!!!!

    btw, can you post an exclusive chapter or interlude about how Damon dies? Dead oss.

    GREAT JOB!! POST SOON :)))

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  28. This is 2 fuckin much !!! I felt like I was watching a lifetime movie , lol !! I'm so pissed at Damon !! How tf could he do that 2 my HB ?? She betta not have nothin !! I wanted SB 2 kill his ass !! Fuck a Damon !! I wonder what the kids thinking right now the probably so confused! But anywho good chapter post soon , I mean REALLY soon! - @NickiDopeAF

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  29. Omg! That sick son of a bitch Damon better Not have given my Nicki shit! I knew that Nigga was suspect the whole time. Poor Nic :/ This chapter was soooooo crazy, like I'm feigning for more lol.

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  30. OH MY FUCKING GOD... Okay first the kids are cute trying ti wake their mom. I knew Damon on sneaky ass was creepin I just didn't think his ugly ass was gay. And I'm so happy mama carol objected. Yes onikafaree can finally be great. I just want them to start all over and nicki needs to sue Damon ass and he better not have gave nicki nothing. And oop at safaree and nicki getting it on in a closet and his and her mons knew about it. Damon just disgusted me And I really had tears in my eyes while she was walking down the isle hoping it would have been sb.... This was a beyond great chapter you need to post ASAP. I mean I am hooked onto thus story

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  31. THE TRIPLETS ARE SOOOOOOOO CUTE. And when Nicki scared them was so cute. I could fully imagine it ! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I love them ! Ethan is my baby ! :D EWWWWWWWWWWWW DAMON !!!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought he was having some type of affair but I didn't think with Phil. He best not have given my Nicki anything :( ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! AND YESSSSSSSSSSS SAFAREE. YOU GO GET YA WOMANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN! But my poor Nicki :( And YESS YESS YESS CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! The chapter was flipping AMAZING ! But don't get me wrong your whole story is great. Every chap leaves me wanting more! POST SOON :D @nicknack_barbie

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  32. Fucking Martha Martha Martha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am here wide awake at 4 in the morning now.,,,Was that just not EVERYTHING!!!!! The triplets are so adorable and I am so dead at their mothers knowing the whole time..Yayyy for the objections I am so glad Momma Carol said something......Muthafucking Safaree Samuels you are the fucking man OK you better let Nicki know what it is...If that wasnt the most romantic heart filled thing ever...You better get your woman!!!!! I knew that nigga was on the downlow I had no idea it was Phil though and isn't he a little fucking diva ol bitch ass I wanna stomp the shit outta him..My babies are back together Praise baby Jesus....Youve got to keep posting or at least one more to tie it up.....Lawd Martha I don't know what else to say BRAVO and sorry for pissing you off to alluding he was gay...my bad :| lol

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  33. Dkeofjekfjejfkfhskwlsdnfjak MARTHA omg you did this one I woke up to read this. I knew something wasn't with him and he's gay, sleeping with my HB oh hell to the NO. I want to beat him and Phil ass for being fuck buddies, lovers whatever and taking money not to mention the risk he has put everyone at ugh can someone beat their asses til they're non identical please, I can't stand his cowardly ass enough about him. Yes for mama carol objecting that monstrosity of a wedding I had a feeling she was gone be one of the few that objected. My bro SB, almost made me cry with his speech like that was mad cute and the way he removed her from that situation and held her while shes at this state OMG Martha I loved it.

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  34. This was AMAZING! Safaree got HIS woman.you did amazing. Don't stress it was perfect

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  35. WOAAAAAAAH! OMFG. WOWOWOWOW. okay.. Damon and Phil are fucking disgusting, vile people. I can't believe Damon was sleeping with Phil and Nicki EURGHH. Yo. his lover turned out to be a man! There's me thinking it was someone who worked for him.. I literally gasped and was like "OHHHHHHHHHH SHITTTTTTTTTTT" You're an amazing writer for thinking of the plot and everything. k. Lmfao at Mama Carol Yussss to her objecting.. even she knows this wedding ain't right! EWP. YAAAAAAAY for Safaree! That was so cute, I was tearing up. And when he carried her to the back! Ahhhh. I hope she doesn't have HIV/AIDS or anything. Oh and when the kids were debating whether to go in to her room or not.. so adorable! Did you really just ask if you should continue? BRUV. OF COURSE YOU SHOULD! And this chapter was AMAZING!

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  36. SGHFAKSKGFAKFAHVSVAGCFGAKFVCBASHHRWQHRMQER5RDdhdfqjnwrSAGVJJFACANWDFWQAYDWGAHNGHVAFSFDHTJHGEJHFVBEJHFGVAVTVGHVFSDEGVGAVEGDEFVGHFVAEGVFGAEGFV HOLY FUCKING SHIT FUCK! MARTHA I FUCKING LOVE YOU! YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! Im so happy Safaree stopped her from marrying Damon's gay scheming ass! And I loved how you put a twist on it because, the wole time I thiught he was sleeping with his assistant, and THIS NIGGA GAY! I cried while reading this whole chapter. The triplets are soooo fucking cute!Safaree got his women! LIKE YASSSSS! ONKAFAREE! And imagine if she stayed with that gay ass nigga! I really hope she didn't catch anything from him. :"""( This chapter was AMAZINGGGG! You are a great fucking writer! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! I loved it and I need more. *itches* please post soon! :) xoxo

    -@LoveKendra_xoxo

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  37. *screams* *yells* *hyprventalates* ugh! I can't right now yooooooo. Like yooooooo. I am too emotional. Like what type of insane unholy shit is taking place right now. Ain't nobody gaht time fur DAT. Smh. Yo. Dawg. Idek where tf to start. Like, Martha I cannot believe you played with my emotions so hard. *screams and punches walls*
    Like I Legit can't breathe. *tries to calm myself* okay. Crazy. Awe the triplets so fucking adorable. Dead at them being at the door contemplating on waking nic. (almost said Carmen -____-) they so mature. Dead at them admiring her and she pops up and grabs them. Scared they little butts lol I love their relationship. Their mannerisms everything. Awe they asked about Safaree. :-( and awe They watching sponge bob ;-D dead at them hiding from mama carol and then them hopping up when she talkin bout giving they stuff away lol cute. Dead she eating like this hher first time. Lol she treating mama carol like and assistant. She shut that down quick. Lol
    Cried when I read from Safaree's POV. Made me emotional as shit. He was sulking in his misery. :-( he wanted Nic. He was stubborn too. Glad mama beezy talked some sense to him. Fuck Damon's POV. Fuck what he thinking. Bitch. I Couldn't stop smiling as she got ready. I hate Damon but just picturing her looking so gorgeous was awesome. Awe at z bear having a fit because she wanted to see her mommy lol, grown. Cute. Awe at her asking t to stand in and he said yesssss! Proud moment. Dead at him saying she'd still be wearing that crimped pink and black hair. Lol The triplets are so fucking smart. They wasn't acting different for no reason. Children know. They know. I fell asleep on that Lil dearly beloved part -_____- Anywho, yessssssss!!!! Objections!!!!Mama carol made so much sense. Hit it on the nose! BEWP. Who is mrs davenport?! YASSSS Safaree..spill ya guts out! Tell yo baby how you really feel. I'm glad Safaree came to his senses. He stopped the mistake of her life! *hugs u* you POPPIN. Dead at Damon Tryna fight him, like nicca get back. I'll personally beat his ass. Tuh! Awe! Faree had a tear!!!!!! Nic wiped it! I swear I cried through the entire objection piece and then I started breathing irregularly. Safaree speech touched me.
    Yoooooooooooo PHIL IS HIS LOVER?!!!!!! Jesus Christ!!!! Sakahhajaksjsksksd I cannot handle this!!!! Like, what is air?!!!! What is life?!!!! What is anything right now?!!!!! *screams* Marry?! Embezzle money?! Divorce?! No feelings?! FOH. That's crazy. Smh. Fuck Phil smart mouth ass! I'll pop him too. Talkin about Nic couldn't please him so Damon came crawling back. Filthy animals. I instantly got sick. Why would they do that to her?! Why?! Then he been his lover since college?! FOH! They really are sick bastards yo! Ugh. Crazy. Safaree shoulda beat Damon hoe ass(PAUZ) I'm crying at the possibility of her might have HIV or AIDS. Like, nah son. Nah. Nah. She ont deserve it!!!! She going through so many emotions feeling a certain type of way. Smh. YASSSS rip that dress. Snatch that necklace. Ugh. Hold her Safaree. Hold her! YASSSSS. They need one another! And if she got it Safaree got it!!! OH LAWD!!!! D: Smh. I'm distraught. Not Damon lying deceitful ugly dawg pig sheep hoe dirty ass Tryna talk to Nic now. Gtfo!! Move!!! You don't go here. My two favorite people are in one another's arms and can't be without the other. I hope they get through this. I hope no one has anything. They have children to live for! CHILDREN! It's crazy. I'm in shock. Good ending I just hope it's not ending for good!! Can it be a trilogy piece?! PLEASE! I need more answers. I never yearned a chapter more than i do now. I NEED ANSWERS. I need to know. C'mon Martha. Be fair. Post again. Please.
    -@MinajFanDetroit

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  38. OMG..!! OMG.!! I had a feeling his ass was gay
    Before I read this chapter I played it out in my head and I knew safaree was going to come back to get his woman I can't believe Damon actually just embarrassed nicki infront of everyone like that but life is a bitch and this was the most interesting, amazing, and shocking story I ever read Please.!! Please.!! Please.!!! Please.!! Please.!! Continue this story I love it so much Please post soon

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  39. :O YOOOOOOO LIK WTF!!!!!?? Well at least Onikafaree is back... Anyways omg my Onika is hurt :( what if she has something lik Wut next lik I can't even start to register this chapter in my brain enough to write this comment lik wow I'm just amazed. Like what can I say? Ummmm well first I never liked Damon anyways and I always knew he was up to no good I did not think he was gay tho. I always knew they would get back together tho they had to I mean after all it is an Onikafaree fix. Im just wondering what will happen next lik I have no. Emotion right now just a little shocked and hurt. Never knew a story could get me this deep in my feelings. Well I'm sad so that's all. I have a question tho lik do u really plan on stopping here because that would be devastating. Like don't stop cuz I'm hooked and cannot stop reading I love this story it's the best one I'm reading so I'm begging you to not stop writing ur so freakin talented!!! Geez just don't stop posting!!! I hope that was enough to save this fic. Look at all these people who enjoy ur story tho lik this is a lot of people in my book. So I'm hoping to see a new chapter soon and if not then thanks for making his story in the first place but ..... I'LL BE WAITING FOR MY MOTHERFUCKIN CHAPTER MARTHA!!!!! Lol love u *kisses your cheek^

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  40. MARTHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I Told You!!!!!!!!!!!! Imma Kill Him . I Imma Murder That Pieces Of Shit!!!!! I Never Like the Shady Bastard!! And What Do You Mean " Should I Leave It" Nawwww Continue This Nigga !!!! Im So Happy Nic Found Out the True Damon But Sad It Was This Way But happy She Didn't Say I Do I Would have Ion Even Know!!! Great Job Keep It Up !!!! Don't make Me Wait To Long For My Chap!!!!

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  41. OMMMMMMFFFFFFFGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNEEEEEWWWWWW he was gay. I knew it! I knewwww it. OMG, I went from crying to gasping to omfg'ing. LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO @ all of them objecting. Funniest shit ever but man. YES you did afuckingmazing. NO don't leave it here nigga continue! Xoxo

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  42. I Knew it was something wrong with Damon since he got introduced. What type of person in their right mind could some shit like that. Smdh. I'm happy that Nicki and Safaree are back together. And you betta continue this story. You can't leave us when they get back together and they still got problems to workout. Really good chapter tho.

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  43. SONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN, MY HEART LITERALLY DROPPED TO MY STOMACH.
    THIS NIGGA WAS GAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I COULD KILL HIM!!!!
    ENDANGERING NICKI && SAFAREE LIKE THAT, UGH!!!!!! well he didn't know about Safaree but still....
    Should you keep going??
    UH, YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!
    1.)I PERSONALLY CAN'T LIVE LIFE WITHOUT YOU STORIES.
    2.) IF THAT NIGGA GAVE NICKI & SB SUMTHING...... I SWEAR TO
    GAWD!!
    3.)THEY NEED TO GET MARRIED, NICKI & SB. LIVE HAPPILY TOGETHER W/ THE KIDS. IM KINDA MAD SHE RUINED THE DRESS CUZ THATS WHAT I WAS HOPING WAS GONNA HAPPEN.
    *sigs* PLEASE DROP STOP WRITING!!!!
    OH, && I WAS DEADASS BOUT TO CRY WHEN SB GOT OFF THE PHONE WITH HIS MOMMA. I THOUGHT HE WAS GONNA BE STUBBORN && JUST LET NICKI GO. WHEW, GLAD HE CAME TO HIS SENSES.
    BUT THE FACT THAT NICKI WAS REALLY GONNA GO THROW WITH IT IS JUST........... SMH.
    ANYWAYS, ....yeah.

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  44. YOOO OMG FHDHHDSJSUSJSJHHSHSOSOJHDH I'M MAD THE KIDS HAD TO SEE ALL OF THIS. WOOOW, IDK WHAT TO SAY. I'M GLAD SHE AIN'T MARRY HIM THOUGH! SMH SMH -@KeeLovesOnika

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  45. Oh dear fuck. GIRL, this chapter was AMAZING. Except for the part where Nicki may have HIV/AIDS. Please, I'm begging DON'T let her have it. Seriously, lol. Like no. Don't ^_^. Wow, I'm tearing up. You're such an amazing writer. Like you MUST continue this, how dare you even think about stopping? I was so nervous the whole time I didn't think Safaree would stop the wedding. Nor did I think Damon was gay! :O I was so shocked. I'm so happy Mrs. Carol objected to. Wow. Like this was an amazing post. PLEASE, post soon. PLEASE continue the story and if you don't do a 3rd one or something. It was so cute, so shocking and I just loved every second of reading it. Job well done.

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  46. OH MY FUCKING JESUS CHRIST! HES GAY! That was like the LAST thing i expected! This was the best chapter! ONIKAFAREE. I loved that Mama Carol objected as well because she knows that Safaree is the only man for her daughter, that was mad cute. But what Safaree said ,made me cry!!!! Like aaaawwwwwww. I LOVED THIS CHAP! But DID NOT love that she might have an STD! Please don't make her get one, like i will deadass go into some kind of depression! I hope things get all cute soon, after she gets checked and stuff. Oh and i want like a cute chap where Nicki and Safaree tell the kids they're together :). I bet they'll be SO happy, especially Ethan!

    Please post soon!

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  47. Omfgosh you better continue ! Cnt leave us hanging like this! Fucking continue please
    I'm crying! Is there another book after thiz I'm in awe! That was soooo good CONTINUE

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  48. Omfgggggghghghg I knew he was gay..I hope these test come back with good results..smhhh ughhh..please continue:)

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  49. OMFG I am literally speechless! WTF Damon is nasty AF for doing that to somebody like there's nothing wrong w/ being gay but why he had to toy with ppls emotions and expose them to harm. He's fuck'n sick for that! The scene where the triplets woke Nicki up was>>>> You have to continue this story I need to know what happens next. Nicki betta NOT have nothing or else imma virtually kick Damon's ass...UGH! POST SOON!

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  50. Usually I'll be going off about Damon but I knew he wasn't no good from the start. And of course you should continue , you're doing so good. And plus we didn't get to celebrate the triplets birthday.

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  51. HOLY FUCKING SHITTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMFG!!!! SJKFGSAGJHGDSFJK. IS THIS REAL LIFE? I CANT BELIEVE DAMON IS GAY! I MEAN I KNEW HE WAS CHEATING AND ABOUT THE MONEY THING BUT OMFG!!! I'M SOOOOOO HAPPY SAFAREE SHOWED UP TO THE WEDDING CUZ THAT JUST MEANT EVERYTHING!<3 YAY MAMA CAROL OBJECTED SHE KNEW DAMON WASN'T RIGHT FOR HER BABY GIRL. I'M GLAD THE KIDS WERE ACTING UP! EVEN THEY KNEW THIS WASN'T RIGHT!!! HOW TF COULD DAMON BE SLEEPING AROUND ON NIC THO?! LIKE WTF?! UGH! I'M SO HAPPY SAFAREE IS THERE COMFORTING HER! THEY NEED EACH OTHER! :'( NO YOU CAN NOT END THIS HERE! YOU MUST POST MORE!!! THIS WAS GREATNESS PERSONIFIED. *bows down*
    -@HeyPrettyNicki

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  52. Damn. CONTINUE most def! I was NOT expecting him to be GAY!! I expected him to have a kid then I thought he was a drug dealer or something then I thought it was a female lover lol but this was GREAT! I want it to continue I wanna see how everything else is gonna play out with Nicki and Damon and the kids and Damon and Safaree and Nicki and everything else in between the money and all that.

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  53. HOLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY FUCKINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG SHITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!! DAMON IS GAYYYYYYYYYY????????????? WHAT THE FUCKING FUCK??????????????????????? HELL NAH, SEEE NOW. I WANNA SHOOT THIS MOTHERFUCKER!!!!!!!!!!! I KNOW ONE THING, NICKI & SB BETTER NOT HAVE NO DAMN HIV/AIDS OR IM FUCKING SHIT UP!!!!!!!!!!!! On the bright side.. Nicki & Safaree are back together!!!!!!!!! ^____________________^ Onikafareeeeeeeee. AND CONTINUE TO POST BECUZ IT'S GETTING BETTER & BETTER !!!!!!!!!

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  54. djiosjfidsoahgfisagfiohagaiofhoifdhi WTTFFFFFFFF OMG I WASNT EXPECTING THT SHIT OMFG FIRST OFF IM SOOO GLAD MOMMA CAROL OBJECTED
    THEN SAFAREE'S LIDDLE SPEECH MADE ME TEAR UP NO LIE...AS FOR DAMN AND PHIL THAT SON OF A BITCH DAMON I SWEAR HIM BEING GAY NEVER CROSSED MY MIND DAMN YOU THREW A CURVE BALL ON THT ONE...and the last part really got me emotional b/c i know when i had a panic attack when i found out my best friend died i basically did everything nicki did....aww poor nicki........please add soon @TeamMinajAwesum

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  55. btw all your chapters are great but this is mos def my favorite one like you did the damn thing on this one....keep it up add soon @TeamMinajAwesum

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  56. Let me repeat this..... A Man BITCH!!!! Wtf!!! Lmfaoooooooo yoooooo bitchhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! Best muthafuckin chapter *bows* bitch i was at the wedding! That how i feel and i love safaree confession! Now lets all go to the doctor lol

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  57. *Sings Usher's Lovers & Friends* LMFAO! *CRYING* A Man BITCH Trebble?! *Sigs* This Nigga Gotta Lova?! Oh, Hellllllllll Naw. Yes, LORDT!!!!!!! Safaree, Mama Carol, & His Gay Ass Lover OBJECTED The Marriage. *CHEESES HARD* Myyyy Babbiieesss Zaria, Daria, && Ethan Are TOOOOO Cute. Quick Question: Can I Jump Up In Dis Bitch & Shoot This Nigger, Damon. Oh & Nicki OR SB BETTER Not Have Shit Or I'm Shutting Shit Down. OnikaFaree reunitedddddddd & It Feels So Good. LMFAO! Post Soon, xoxo - @XoMyOnika

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  58. i loved this chapter!!! Yesssss they stopped the fucking wedding ^.^ I'm glad somebody finally aired damon out because he was dead wrong for what he was doing. We always knew damon was cheating but never thought it was with a guy =0. Safaree's speech was so sweet made me want to cry! Him holding her at the end *drifts off into a daydream* so cute!! Continue this. Please post soon =)@SaveMeBarb

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  59. OMFG LIKE I SERIOUSLY CANT THINK RITE NOW!
    ~@NickiMmemphis

    oh ima have to give u a real comment later cuz CH...

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  60. I KNEW HE WAS GAY!!! Omg. Safarees speech>>>>> I really need Safaree to beat his gay ass! But don't he know that 500000 ain't shit to the queen?! Yaaaasssss to mama carol speaking up! Perfect chapter!!

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  61. The triplets r such a mess with they lil selfs, aw my lil E-man was scared to get in trouble and baby-D lil messy ass teasing him lol. Baby-D always trying to send the others out but my lil Z-bear wasnt going NO MA'AM NO GIRL (coochieness voice) LOL. Aw Nic is the best freaking mom EVER! Aw they want they daddy at the wedding, my poor lil bew bews. =( LOL they hid from Mama Carol to quick, and damn Nic snitched to freaking hard on them. HA they hurried up and got from under the covers when they thought they was finna get they stuff giving away LOL crazy liddle bugs. YES Mama Carol shut Nic down mad quick i love it for some odd reason =/ (wut does that say about me? LMAO)
    Um in not here for Safaree stanky ass not taking a bath all that time, still in his damn rehearsal clothes... that shit aint cute! Oop they moms be paying attention, like they knew Nic and SB was having the affair... CH. Ugh Safaree stop being so damn stubborn and talk to Nic... DAMN.
    Ugh Damon should be nervous, hell he might catch on fire from going in a church so he needs to be scared TBQFH!
    Aw Nicki got her dress on, my poor lil Z-bear having a fit she want to see her mommy in the dress. Terrence damn right it will be an honor to be in the Queens wedding like look who the fuck we talking about... Nicki fuckn Minaj, Onika Maraj greatness at its fineness!
    Aw my lil babies feeling the stress cuz of the wedding, they know it aint right and that they mom dont need to marry Damon the dick head -_- Oop not here for Nic snapping on Ethan Ch... she better get her life. HELL FUCKN YES TO EVERY MUTHAFUCKA THAT OBJECTED! Not the damn crowd being GH lol they need to STHU! Aw Safaree speech >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> i felt every word lol. REVIWRVWIBEIRUVREOQWORUHUGEHTVEROUFHEUVHEOHNEUHBNQETIONERLJOTIBROHKNOJKUYHOBYTDORCJEOSJCMWLIOUXNIAUZIUHSNCIWNIRDVLNOOGYIBJTFIOVEOILJFNOEROUVN3WRIOEVEPM
    I KNEW THAT DIRTY BITCH WAS GAY, HE SUCH A NASTY TRIFLIN DICK IN THE BOOTY ASS DOG! NICKI PLZ JUST SLAP THAT CUM OUTTA HIS ASS, DONT LET HIM SAY SHIT! UGH Y THEY DIDNT LET SB BEAT HIS ASS, HE DESERVE EVERYTHING COMING HIS FUCKN WAY. OMFG MY POOR NIC HAVING A PANIC ATTACT. FOH FOH THIS NIGGA TALKING BOUT LET HIM EXPLAIN... BITCH IF U DONT GET YO NASTY ASS AWAY FROM THE DOOR! UGH I CANT STAND HIM. LAWD IF THEY HAVE SOMETHING... MY GAWD I CANT... I JUST.... LAWD *falls to my knees* LAWD JUZES I CANT TAKE IT!
    FOH THIS SHIT PISSED ME AWF ALL OVA AGAIN! UGH. POST ASAP OR IT GOING BE A PROBLEM!

    ~@NickiMmemphis

    P.s Now u have ur REAL comment! =)

    No but for real Martha plz post ASAP PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ!

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  62. Continue ! Continue !

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  63. >:''''''''''((((((((((((((((((( WTFFFFFFFF YOOOOOOO!?!?! >:( OMGGG This NIGGA So LUCKY This is A Fic! lmfao OMGGG IM AM THE FUCK PISSED...Like HE Cheated On Nicki.........WITH A MAN!!! He's GAYYYY!!??! TFF!?!?!? >:( hduisgfyudastsdyufdstyfgys .............UGHH..Anyway I Knew SB Was Gonna Object ^_^.. But The Fact That The Kids Were Still In The ROOM!?!?! Where Are They? what were they thinking? o_O Anyway IF Nicki Has SOMETHINGG I Will Hate You LONG TIME! LOL ..K BYE ♥

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