Sunday, May 6, 2012

Road To the Wedding Part.2....

*Omg Wasn't Nicki the cutest thing in the Pepsi commercial? Anywho, Here you go you guys. There will be one more Road To the Wedding. I hope you guys enjoy.*


Nicki sat by the window watching the snow that fell last night melt away from the rays of the sun. She woke up to an empty house, Safaree came and picked up the kids for daycare before she awakened. Nicki was left alone with nothing but her thoughts and all she could think about was Safaree. She couldn't stop replaying in her head one thing he he said to her yesterday, "You couldn't have possibly thought I wouldn't catch feelings...", did that mean he does have feelings for me? She thought to herself.

Nicki walked into the kitchen and poured her some more tea, her throat was becoming sore and she could not afford to become sick. She had to much to do and so little time. Nicki went to get ready before the wedding planner got to her house. Today she was to sign off on the flower selection for the reception, the food, and the cake. Nicki wished she didn't have to do this alone but she was playing the hand she was dealt. An hour and a half later Nicki was sitting in her front room with papers surrounding her for her to sign.

"Carla make sure to tell the chef that my chicken better not be dry." Nicki signed off on the menu.

"I will make sure to relay that message. Now we agree on the yellow and white roses?"

"Yes. You still have that credit card I gave you?" Nicki asked.

"Yes and here are your receipts from my previous purchases for you."

"Thank you my darling."

"If there is nothing else to discuss my work here is done."

"Alright, well I'll talk to you later. You know if any problems arise call me no matter the time."

"Yes I know. Goodbye Nicki." Carla let herself out.

Nicki went and poured her a glass of wine. She sat down on the couch with the throw blanket over her legs. Mentally she went over all the things she had to do as far as work. She had to go and work on her fight choreography. The stunt coordinator was convinced to come to her instead of her going to him. She couldn't stomach leaving her children for a whole month. She sipped her wine and let it warm her body. The house phone rang.

"Hello."

"Hi Ms. Maraj?"

"Yes this is her."

"Hi this is Cindy down at Wilson's Daycare." Nicki sat her glass down.

"Hi Cindy. Is everything alright?"

"There was an incident between Zaria and another child in her class. We need you to come and pick her up."

"I'll be there." Nicki hung up the phone. She quickly put on her heels, coat, grabbed her keys and purse. She was out the door within five minutes.

When Nicki pulled up she seen Safaree locking his car. They walked into the school together both wondering what Zaria could have done. Walking into the main office they spotted Zaria sitting in a chair giving another little girl a death glare. When they seen it was Lucy they knew what was up. Nicki heard Karen ranting coming down the hall. Safaree seen that Nicki was getting amped so he moved in between her and the door. Karen came through the door with the principle. She looked at Lucy's shirt and saw the now drying blood and got even more loud. Nicki sat her coat and purse next to Zaria.

"You okay baby?" Nicki asked Zaria never taking her eyes off Karen.

"Yes." Zaria never took her eyes off Lucy.

"Mrs. Riley what happen?" Safaree asked picking up Zaria.

"It seems that Zaria and Lucy had a fight."

"More like your child attacked my poor daughter." Mrs. Dorsy said.

Zaria squirmed in Safaree's arms.

"Don't act like your daughter is so innocent. She's been picking on Zaria for the longest, finally she had enough and did something about it."

Safaree walked up to her and whispered in her ear.

"Calm down." he said.

"Actually the kids say that Lucy was not bothering Zaria." Mrs. Riley

"See! You need to teach your kids some manners and how to behave." Karen spat out.

"She was actually picking on Daria." Mrs. Riley knocked Mrs. Dorsy of her high horse.

"I knew it. My kids don't fight unless they have a reason." Nicki spat lunging towards Karen. Safaree pushed her back.

"It seems Lucy and a group of girls were making fun of Daria's Dyslexia and that's when Zaria jumped on Lucy and repeatedly punched her in the face until she was pulled away by one of the staff. Now we are going to have to send Zaria home for two days."

"What? You see she was provoked." Nicki said getting angry.

"No Daria was provoked. Zaria had nothing to do with what was happening."

"So she's being punished for defending her sister?"

"Violence will not be tolerated here at Wilson's."

"So Lucy will be getting the same punishment we assume?" Safaree asked.

"She will be sent home for the rest of the day and she has to write an apology to Daria."

"Zaria gets suspended but she has to write some Bull-"

"Nicki!" Safaree cut her off.

Nicki put her coat on and grabbed her purse.

"Give me my baby." She took Zaria from him. "Can I go get her things?" she asked walking out of the office not waiting for a reply.

"I'm sorry we had to meet again under these circumstances Mr. Samules." Mrs. Riley said.

"Yeah me too." Safaree walked out the office as well.

He walked down the hall to the kids classroom and seen Nicki talking to Daria and Ethan outside the door.

"Mommy will be back to pick you up at the end of the day."

"I want to go home too mommy." Daria said.

"No baby. You have to stay here and learn some more so you can come home and teach mommy some stuff." Nicki kissed her forehead.

"Daddy can I have a dollar." Ethan walked up to Safaree.

"Why?"

"Cause..." Ethan tried to think of a reason.

"Boy no. You don't need a dollar." He picked him up and turned him upside down. "You been being good?"

"Yes." Ethan giggled.

"Why didn't you help your sister when she was laying hands?"

"I can't hit girls."

"That's right and you better always remember that." Safaree put him down as Mrs. Jones came out of the classroom with work for Zaria to do at home.

"Alright here are her spelling words she needs to know for Friday and some math problems as well." She handed them to Nicki. "Again Ms. Maraj I'm sorry about this."

"Yeah me too." Nicki rolled up the papers and stuck them in her purse. "Alright you two get back to class and make mommy proud."

"Bye mommy, bye daddy." They said as they went back in the room.

Safaree and Nicki walk out with Zaria. Nicki strapped her in her seat and close the door getting in herself. She was beyond mad at this situation.

Baby Daddy
I'll meet you at your house

She didn't respond, just took off towards the highway.

"I'm sorry mommy." She heard some from the back seat. Nicki looked through her rear view mirror.

"Why baby?"

"For fighting." Zaria looked near tears.

"Well Z fighting is never the answer and you know that. You stood up for your sister and there is nothing wrong with that. Don't feel bad baby you're not in trouble." Nicki took the off ramp. Safaree was right behind her.

Opening the door to the house everyone stepped in and stomped the snow off their boots. Zaria sat on the oak bench and took off her boots handing them to Safaree.

"What am I supposed to do with these?" he asked.

"Put them up." She took Nickis hand. "Mommy can we have lunch."

"You didn't eat at school?"

"I was gonna but then Lucy started messing with Daria and I beat her up." Nicki and Safaree started laughing.

"Oh so you beat her up?" Nicki asked sitting Zaria on the stool at the island.

"Yep."

Safaree turned Zaria around and started checking her for scratches or bruises. He stood her up and pulled down her leggings and check her legs.

"Is she okay?" Nicki asked putting the bread on the griddle to make them grilled cheese sandwiches. She had the tomato soup on the stove heating up.

"Yeah she doesn't have any marks." He pulled her leggings back up. "Way to go slugger." He held his hand out and they slapped fives.

"Don't encourage her Safaree, she was wrong for fighting." She said sternly.

"She knows she's not supposed to be fighting." Safaree picked her up by the front of her shirt and put her above him in the air. "You bet not let me hear you've been fighting anymore. You got it?"

"Yes." She said smiling and giggling.

"See she knows." He said looking at Nicki. "You're to pretty to be fighting." He put Zaria down.

Nicki just shook her head and went back to the grilled cheese. Safaree sat next to Zaria and began to talk to her about what she wanted for her birthday next month.

"Z-Bear do you want water or apple juice?"

"Water." she answered then went back to explaining the bike she wanted.

"You know you have to call Nana and Granny and tell them what happened." Nicki said plating a sandwich and pouring soup in a bowl.

Zaria stopped talking and looked at the back of Nicki. When Nicki turned around with her food they locked eyes.

"Can you tell them pwease?" She asked.

"Nope don't start that 'pwease' talk, you can speak correctly and no you have to tell them." Nicki sat her food down and went back to make another plate. "Do you want food?" she yelled out to Safaree.

"Are you going to throw it at me this time?" He asked. Nicki smiled and took him his food sitting it gently in front of him.

"Is that better?"

"Very, thanks." Nicki rolled her eyes at him and went to sit in her study.

Thirty minutes later Safaree had did some math problems with Zaria until she became sleepy. He put her down for a nap and went to go find Nicki. When he stepped in the study he seen her standing by the window crying. He walked up to her and pulled her into his arms. She held him tight.

"Daria will be fine Nicki."

"I told you what would happen. My baby shouldn't have to go through this." she sobbed.

"Everything will be okay, she will beat this. She is already making progress."

"What's going on here? Nicki why are crying?" They both looked at the doorway to see Damon standing there.

"Oh hey babe." Nicki pulled away from Safaree ticking him off. For those few moments his world felt right with her in his arms then Damon brought him back to reality.

"What's wrong with you?"

"It's nothing, we'll talk about it later." She said. Damon came and hugged her kissing her forehead.

Safaree stormed out of the room.

"What's his problem?" Damon asked.

"I don't know." Nicki lied. They heard the front door slam shut. "I'm going to call Carla and make sure everything is still going smoothly." She kissed him.

"Alright I'm going to the office. We'll talk later okay?"

"Sure." She sat behind her desk and watched him leave out. She pulled out her phone.

Baby Mama
Are you okay?

Baby Daddy
Don't txt me, worry about your future husband.

Baby Mama
:"(

Nicki went and got her Finance book to go over it.

Safaree POV
How could she still want to marry that clown? I'm the one she is supposed to be walking down the aisle to marry. I'm the one that loves her unconditionally and would do anything she wanted and needed.

Safaree's thoughts were going a mile a minute. He speed down the streets in his Lambo going 60 over the limit. He had no particular place he was headed he just wanted to drive and get all his thoughts together. Nicki seemed to be in all his thoughts which only made him more angry.

"Fine if she doesn't want me I won't sit around here sad over her ass. I'm not bad looking I can get anybody I want." Safaree slowed down and pulled out his cellphone. He went through his contacts and ran across a someone he hadn't talked to in awhile. He pushed talk.

Four Days later

Safaree went and picked up Daria after school from Nicki's house. When he got there the kids were doing homework so he had to wait around. Nicki tried talking to him but he just ignored her for the most part. Unless it was about the kids or business he felt they had nothing to talk about. When the kids were done he wrapped Daria up and they left.

"So what so you want to do today?"

"Um I don't know?" she said in a small voice.

Nicki told Safaree that Daria hadn't been her usual self since the incident at the school. She wasn't loud and outspoken like she usually was. She just stayed in her room with her dolls.

"What do you mean you don't? Think about all the stuff you want to do and we will pick one to do." He glanced at her through his rear view mirror. She was looking down at her fingers and sighed.

"Arcade I guess." she said softly.

"Okay then to the arcade we go."

Safaree drove for another 20 minutes or so then pulled into the Wacky Zone parking lot. He unfastened Daria and carried her in.

"So what do you want to play first?"

"Soccer." she said dryly and taking off her coat.

"Let's go get tokens, do you want to put the money in?" they walked over to the token machine.

"No, you can do it." She leaned against his leg.

He looked down at her thinking she was exactly like her mom. Whenever Nicki would have something on her mind she would mope around and be up under him. Well she used to, he thought. He shook his head freeing any thoughts of Nicki and got the tokens for them.

"Okay come on."

Daria played the soccer game the whole time. She worked up a sweat and everything. Safaree took it as her letting out her aggression about what was bothering her. He made her stop only when he noticed her breathing was becoming uneven. He gave her a puff of her inhaler.

"Come on baby girl let's go rest and eat. What do you want?" he asked as they sat down at their table.

"I want the fries with the chili on them."

"You trying to be like daddy now?" he tickled her. When they're waiter came he ordered a large chili fry with cheese and two lemonades. While they waited he figured he would start trying to get her to talk.

"So baby girl mommy says she thinks that you're sad?"

"I am." she laid her head on his side.

"Do you want to talk about it?" he sat her on his lap.

"The kids make fun of me. They call me names."

"Like what?"

"Dumb, stupid, we-tard." he tried not to laugh at her pronunciation of the word.

"Daria you are none of those words. You are very smart baby girl." The waiter came back with their fries. He sat her down so she could eat. "Can I tell you something?" She shook her head yes.

"I have dyslexia too." Safaree confessed.

Daria's eyes grew big when he said it. She chewed her fry fast.

"Really?"

"Yes. The kids used to call me those same names but I didn't let that stop me. I eventually learned how to read really good and you will too."

"But I don't have any friends no more. Nobody likes me, they think I'll give them what I have." She stuck another fry in her mouth.

"You have friends baby. Don't let what they say bother you, you will be reading better than them in no time. And you will be the smartest kid in the class and everyone will try and be your friend. Daddy has dyslexia and I'm pretty cool right?" he asked.

"Yeah." She sipped her lemonade getting chili all over the straw. "You have friends too." she said.

"Yeah  I do huh? So you will have friends. You can't let what the other kids say get to you Daria, remember that."

"Okay daddy." She smiled at him. Daria stood up and hugged him around his neck, kissing his cheek getting chili all on the side of his face. "I love you." She sat back down and continued eating.

"I love you to Daria." He wiped his face with a napkin. "So was that all you were sad about?"

"Yep."

"Alright well when we get done Daddy is going to show you how to play the basketball game okay?"

"Okay daddy."

Safaree was happy he could help her. He knew she would probably get sad again but at least she knew she wasn't the only one with the problem and could talk to him. He felt accomplished with their outing.

Rehearsal Dinner

Nicki and Damon were greeting their guest at the door of the room they rented at the hotel. Most in attendance were apart of the wedding party the rest just family. Nicki was happy to be done with the wedding rehearsal. She just wanted Saturday to come and go with out drama. Everyone seemed happy with everything so she was happy. She looked around and didn't see Safaree. He was at the church but said he had to go get something and would meet the wedding party there. It was about time to start eating and he was nowhere insight.

"You ready to bless the food and start eating?" Damon asked. She peeped out the door one last time and still no Safaree.

"Sure let's do it."

"He'll be here baby don't worry." He kissed her lips. They began to walk to the front when Nicki heard Safaree.

"I know y'all not about to start eating without me?"

Nicki turned around with the biggest smile but it soon vanished when she seen that Safaree had brought a girl with him. It wasn't just some random girl because she wouldn't be fuming mad like she was but Safaree knew she didn't like this girl.

"Shante." Nicki said just above a whisper.

"Hello Nicki." She smiled and waved.

TBC

*Well...yeah...Shit just got real. What do you think about Nicki and Safaree? What y'all think gone happen at this dinner? I personally know what EYE want to happen but Tell me your thoughts just for shits and giggles. Remember DO NOT TALK ABOUT THE STORY ON THE TL NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU DON'T LIKE DAMON. That's all y'all ever talk about for people who supposedly don't like the man. Y'all BEEN A FAN! 50 comments. If you are not getting twitter notifications from me @ me and let me know. Hope you enjoyed!*

55 comments:

  1. Great chapter... and lawdddd. what the hell is about to happen. And Nic and sb need to talk and stop avoiding the situation -_-

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  2. This bitcchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I can't I just cant....Lawd have mercy and fuck them little kids picking on my Daria.That was an adorable father/daughter moment.I can't believe SB bought Shante ass.This dinner is gonna be quite awkward that was mad childish of SB though but Nicki deserves it.Lets get this wedding shif over with so Onikafaree can be great.Great Work as usual Martha

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  3. UGHHHH !! REALLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYYYYY . . . . I HATE DAMON FAGGET ASS NIGGA -__- ! I THINK SB SHOULD PISS NIC OFF AND SHOW HER HOW IT FEELS !!! THEN WHEN SHE REALIZE SHE LOVES SAFAREE AND CANT SEE HIM WITH NOBODY ELSE ! AFTER THAT THEY SHOULD CONFESS THEY LOVE AND BE TOGETHER

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  4. FUCK GET RID OF DAMON AND SHANTE!uuuuuuuuuggggggghhhh! >:/ That bitch. I hope Nic beats her ass tbh. And fuck the lil kids for makin fun of my lil lady bug Daria :( Yaaass at Zaria standing up for her tho. They're all just adorable. AND a perfect family if Nic and Safaree would get outta they damn feelings and TALK! If they don't end up together in the end I will cry :(

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  5. EYE still wanna know what he did with her finance book. And GO Zaria for defending her sister and winning but I feel bad for Daria =\ but at least she can go to SB when she's feeling down and as for SB bringing that girl just because Nicki doesnt like her petty smh and as for Damon besides that finance book he was actually ok in this chapter besides going to the office or whatever when he saw Nicki was upset even though he asked her what was wrong he could of at least still stayed with her but anyway good chapter now that next part please tell us what happened with that finance book.

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  6. OHHHHMYGOSH. I feel so bad for Daria :( she really should't have to go through that. Poor Nicki! GAH I DON'T LIKE DAMON HE'S JUST REALLY ANNOYING AND NEEDS TO GO AWAY. I HATE HIM. But man Z is a thug. She don't be playin shoutout to her!! Man why Faree go & bring that girl? Smh, he ODEEn wow. I think Nicki is gonna try to keep it cool with Shante but she rlly dsnt want too. THANK U FOR UPDATING! God knows I've been feening for a chapter!! (: Great CHAPTER!

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  7. Yaaaassss, some real drama bout to go down. Imma need Nic and this girl to go at it, so Damon can see that she's jealous and cancel the wedding. She probably gon' be all over Safaree too just to make Nic mad> Anything after this is bound to be exciting. Zaria is a real BOSS! She beat that girl up without getting a single scratch

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  8. Zaria is BOUT. THAT. LIFE. She better fight for her sister, poor Daria tho. I'm sad she has to go through that. And uhh this wedding party...not feeling it. Them two stay doing things to each other out of spite like yall love each other, accept it, admit it and get back together.

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  9. I think they shouldn't get married and HB and Safaree should get back together and live happily ever after! :)) lol but she need to go over her finance books something's fishy about it!

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  10. Awww my little Radial is getting picked on :''''( I'm glad my Z bear was to the rescue!!! My baby should not be picked on because of her condition so the whole class should be suspended >.<
    Anyway safaree need to stop with that loser Damon....bringing shanties around? Not this bitch again...
    Great chapter keep it up!!!

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  11. What do I think about Nicki and Safaree??? They need to be together again. PERIOD. POINT BLANK! What do I think is gonna happen at this dinner? Oh..well I'm coming in and flipping tables upside down and awlat!! FOH. Who is this unwelcome irrelevant Shante slore?? Safaree muster ally wanna get cut right now cuz..nah. WTF!?!? I'm mad! >:OO I say..Nic and Shante brawl..Nic confesses the love she still has for Safaree and the affair...no let me stop. You work your magic, but you get my point....I HATE DAMON..Im NOT here for DamonNika, etc, etc!!! It's about to be some drama Lawd. Thanks for posting!! Xoxo Loved it!!!

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    1. Shante is from the first story remember?

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    2. Lol yea I remember her. The girl who helped Safaree choose a bag,and the rest is history, grrr..-__-

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  12. He deadass wrong for bringin Shante !! ITS ABOUT TO GO DOWN !! Poor Daria , Zaria whooped that girl ass lmaooooooo !! Great chapter !! -@NickiDopeAF

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  13. HELL NAW DNT NOBODY LIKE DAMON OL JIMINY CRICKET LOOKIN ASS! AWWWWWWWWWWWWW POOR DARIA! LMAOOOOOOOOOOO ZARIA AIN'T SCARED TO BLESS SOMEBODY WHEN SHE LAY THEM HANDS ON'EM. AWWWW SHE THOUGHT SHE WAS IN TROUBLE LOL CUTE. UN-UH WTH ETHAN NEED A DOLLA FOE? I'M SO FUCKING TIRED OF DAMON'S ASS THAT IT MAKES ABSOLUTELY MAKES NO SENSE! I MEAN HE'S LIKE A WASTE OF A SPERM CELL SHEESH! WTF HIS ASS UP TO ANYWAY CUZ I'VE SAID IT ONCE AND I'LL SAY IT AGAIN, HIS ASS IS GRIMY AND I CAN'T FUCKING WAIT UNTIL HE'S EXPOSED. UN-UH WHO THE FUCK IS THAT BITCH? LIKE REALLY SAFAREE? SOOO TO MAKE HA JEALOUS YOU INVITE A BITCH YOU KNOW SHE DNT LIKE TO THE FUCKING WEDDING REHEARSAL DINNER? I MEAN C'MON HOW OLD ARE WE PEOPLE? SMH, SMFH, AND SMDH! *cues music* IT'S ABOUT TO BE A WHAT?????? GIRL FIGHTTTTTTTTTTTT!

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  15. SHIT JUST GOT THE FUCK REAL UP IN THESE STREETS NIGGAS!!!!! .....ok ok ok lemme start from the beginning tho

    First of all I'm mad Nicki aint realize Damon bitch ass was fuckin around in her financial book yet

    I'm glad my bitch Z whupped that I love lucy bitch ass

    Safaree need to stop bein on his damn period and tell Nic how he feel n Nic need to stop bein so damn proud n stubborn n break up with Kentucky flying ass Damon!!!

    [now back to our regularly scheduled program]

    SHIT JUST GOT THE FUCK REAL UP IN THESE STREETS NIGGAS!!!!!
    THIS NIGGA BROUGHT MUTHA FUCKIN SHANTE!!! THAT BITCH...FUCK HER!!! AND I DONT EVEN KNOW THAT BITCH

    FUCK HER UP NICKI!!! SHIT WRITE ME INTO THE NEXT CHAPTER ... I FUCK THAT BITCH UP!!!

    THIS DINNER BOUT TO TURN INTO A DINNER N A MOVIE .... LEMME GET A PLATE

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  16. AYE Zaria is about that Life that is so good she Fought for daria awwwwwwww But Nic should already call off the wedding with Damon i want her and SB to Get married....anD SB Brought another chick to Nic Dinner Rehearsal you kno shit about to get real i cant wait for the next chapter!!! XOXO Post soon

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  17. LAWD!!!! This is not what I expected I thought it was gonna be cute and happy but I forgot how much u love drama. -_- Martha I'm depressed. Ur story is making me sad just let Onikafaree be great and let Damon and this girl Shante die in a hole together. I am in love with this chapter tho it was very well structured as always. Your use of description words is amazing like not to much that it's to much description and not to little description. My fav part is when Safaree was talking to Daria. Lik Safaree is such a great father and person overall in this story but I really think he's just soooo hurt. It's really making me mad how in love they are with eachother lik there love is beyond everything and yet they can't see it. SON ZARIA BE WOOPIN ASS!!!! Completely in love with this chapter and this story. Thank you for writing I appreciate it and you. Showing my appreciation with the longest ass comment I have ever done soo u BETTA like and appreciate this comment!! Lol Jk!! IT'S LEXI BITTCCHH!!! Lol

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  18. Okay . So you know how on Diary of a mad black woman the other sister got married ? Thts what needs to happen except for Nic is just gonna Marry SB . This is how the dinner needs to go ---- Nic gets mad and be like "but you wasnt thinking bout tht how when you was all up in this the other night" & everybody gasps & Damon stupid ass gets mad but then somebody exposes why Damon had took the Lil money book . & Nic say she don't wanna get married no more but SB gets on one knee & asks her to marry him . Then his date be pressed but no1currrrrr . But anyways ----- yassssss my baby whooped tht Lil girl ass ! & my other baby is not as sad anymore ! Ethan has no problems . Lol but SB & Nic need to stop doing things out of spite . K . Great chapter as always .

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  19. Das rght Z-Bear beat that lil annoyin rat for messin with ur sister (i do not promote violence among young children)lmaooooooooo.... *Sigh* They pickin on my Daria =(... That father daughter talk was too precious =).

    I am not here for Safaree bringing this bitch like you and Nicki need to stop with bullshittin rght this minute!!!!!!! ONIKA, you nd i kno damn well you dont wanna marry Damon creepin ass so just leave him!! Im tired of all these games you nd Safaree be playin get it together nd get back together.

    Great Chapter as usual Martha.. Its SHORT -__- But it was great.
    Post soon.. Like 2morrow.. =D

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  20. Omg!! I fucking Dislike Damon just because. This ratchet ugly fuck face ass shante is back FUCK. I don't like that hoe and Nicki needs to whoop her ass again just for being in her presence. Ok so I think Nicki will be at the wedding and then realize that she wants Safaree and only Safaree, and SB will enterupt the wedding and tell nicki he loves her and kick Damon ass then marry nicki right then and there. I love that moment Daria and Safaree had. Great Chapter even tho I wanna best SB ass. Post soon

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  21. :ooo its abt to be RATCHET that place. Like YO. I need you to POST. ASAP. Cuzzzz....

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  22. Grrrrr, I was so lonely with out u hmph, anyway Brittany , I honestly thought the girl would have been Melanie , I forgot all about Shante which is weird becuz we have the same name. And don't judge me I couldn't have thought of any girl SB messed around with. And OH! How childish of SB Smh, I'm dying to know what will happen, keep me updated @AshanteTM

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  23. Oh and I fucks with Z bear. What a big dawg.

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  24. Zaaaaaamn the bro don came up on a whole fling! Nick nac mad ass fuck!!!!! I cang wait to see wat hb do!!! This was genius but rather short! U was doing good with length wat happened?

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  25. Aww look at zaria takin up for her sister that's what Lucy ass get. Damon so damn stupid he don't think it's odd that his future wife all hugged up with her ex?? And safaree wrong for bringing shante I want nic to beat her ass right there. Or maybe Damon and shante can run off and get married and leave my onikafaree alone. I know Nicki whole attitude about to change and hopefully Damon sense it so maybe hell realize that she don't want him...

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  26. i think they are just being petty .. Like nicki being stubborn but cautious cuz damon ..sb getting careless impatient .. Uggghhh thats making me mad .. I think the dinner is gonna be awkward .. Nicki is gonna try to compete wit shante .. Damon gonna see whats goin on but dont say nothing .. Sb is just gonna be a coon and make nicki think about what shes losin to shante .. Maybe a fight cuz she dont like her .. Damon might have to leave he got a "call" from work .. .... But she was goin over her books soo nicki know something wrong hopefully .. ... Awwwww daria ... zaria a thug in leggins lol .. Ethan wanted his dolla doe lol ... Great chapter

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  27. That was the most cutest beatifulest bestest adorable father daughter bonding time ever! I hope Daria feels better now that her Daddy told her he is dyslexic, i think its going to bring them EVEN closer. Bless her ! Anyways i was mad when Damon walked in on the onikafaree moment. ROFL @ Ethan wanting a random ass dollar for NO reason whatsoever. I'm sad that Safaree bought Shante. Even though hes annoyed about Damon, he still knows Nicki hates her guts. Maybe it will bring them together tho, maybe Shnate and Damon can go together even ! Great chap, please post soon tho!

    @ilovenickiandSB

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  28. Oh yeah :( at him changing her to baby momma in his phone

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  29. Yew POPPIN. Oh and @ me when you post. -___- my comment might not be the usual, because I'm sick. I've been too weak to really do anything, but I'll suffer fa yew Martha bew!
    Nic cant stop thinking About Safaree. Figures. I just wish she would act on it. Oh snap I hope she don't get sick, she dealing with enough already. Aye she got receipts from Carla, I wonder is that gone make her realize faster that her finance book might have been tampered with. Speaking of which. Fuck Damon.
    Dead at zaria beating the girl til she bled. Lol mah nicca! Go z-bear! Go! Lol. Dead and she giving her the death glare. Oop! Nic was finna clown on that lady too. They should have let her. Iont like that bitch. Word?! She can't come back for two days?! Smh and the little girl get basically a half day off and write a letter?! That is pure BULLSHIT. ugh. I feel bad for Daria. She shouldn't be teased. :-( and awe Daria and Ethan wanted to go home too. They cute. Lol at Ethan wanting a dollar and not having a reason. Too cute. Zaria so mature, she apologized. Awe. Cute. Dead at her saying he beat the girl up and Nic and Safaree laughing lol. At least she she ain't have no bruises it marks. BEWP. She whooped dat OSS. (yes I meant to spell it that way -_____-) She's intelligent too, she chose water over juice. Dead at her not wanting to tell her grandmothers. Lol. Ha. She tried to get Nic to do it with that liddo "pwease" Nic shut her down. Hahaha.Awe Nic is being nice to Safaree. She smiled at him and didn't throw his food. S/o2 them I love they relationship with they kids. Safaree did homework with Z and put her down for a nap. BRAVO.
    Awe Nic crying. Dont cry Nic. YASSSS Safaree hold her. Awe he know her so well. He already knew what was bothering her. Ugh at Damon walking in. Ol cock blocker. Smh not Nic pushing away. Ugh. Awe Safaree pissed/hurt. Not Damon not being phased by catching them hugged up. He ont love her forreal. Ugh. Any nicca woulda been pissed. Then he gone ask what his problem. BITCH. Ugh not Nic Tryna care through a text. I'm glad her shut her down. And oh YASSSS the finance book. Check it Nic check it. Awe Safaree is really hurt that is sad. He out here driving deadly speeds and shit. I just want them right. Awe Daria don't be sad sweetie. I'm glad Safaree took her out and talked to her. I hope she doesn't let it bother her from here on out. I hope she gets back to herself and learns fast. She so adorable getting food on his cheek. Lol. They cute. Aye them chili cheese fries sound dope af. And that lemonade! (I'm hungry haven't ate since Friday :-/)
    Ugh not Safaree Tryna make a grand entrance. He knew what he was doing. Fool. Ugh.smh yo I'm mad. Why would he bring the shante bitch?! He petty. Nic is heated. I hope she snap. And beat some ass. She was happy until she realized he brought shante. Ugh. He ignorant.
    I think Nic and Safaree are both petty and childish. They need to grow up and stop hiding their feelings. I think the dinner gone be awkward if it don't end right where it started when Nic get to fighting.
    Oh don't forget to mention me when you post. Oh andimma read that other story you DMd me I just been sick and working. Now mostly sick. Imma try to get to it soon. Great post. Update soon.
    -@MinajFanDetroit

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  30. O-<----------------<
    That was a cute Daddy & me time scene. Also GERL if you don't cancel that wedding & put Nik n Safaree back together I will cut you. And WHO IN THE BLODDY HELL IS THIS SHANTE BITCH?!

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  31. Damnt safaree that's childish bringing that hoe! This lucy bitch needa leave Daria alone. Please bring nicki and safaree back to their senses please!! Xoxo

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  32. ...OHH SHITT Its ABOUT To go dowwnn *Kevin Hart Voice* Okay Soo *Ignores Damon & Shante* Hopefully All This Will Get Nicki & Safaree Together...K...And That Was A Cute Daddyy & Me Scene ♥ Post SOONNN! ;D

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  33. Safaree wtf?!! WHY IS SHE BACK IN THE STORY? shit its about to get ugly. That dinner will be a mess smh. Damon don't even seem jealous of SB it's like he doesn't care AND I want to know what is he doing with Nicki's finances?...

    -Post soon please.

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  34. GWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRL. All this drama I'm a need some more posts! You can't leave me hanging like that. I wanna know more about his girl though :O & OMG, EYE want Nicki to beat her ass personally. But idk cause, I just feel like something is gonna go down between them. I know it. IIcki :O I hope he was mad. Anyways. GREAT GREAT post.

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  35. Awww, poor Daria. :'( My baby Zaria a scrapper stickin up for her sis! ^_^ Damon needa go somewhere. WTF Safaree how u gon bring this heffa up in there?! It's bout to go down. Ugh...Why can't they just be together. *cries* lmao.

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  36. Nope, NO, Absolutely Not. Hell to the Fuck NO!! Im not here for NONE of this!!! Nicki still planning for an unwanted wedding && shit!! Then Safaree trying to hide his feeling by bring another girl, likkkee -_-*
    Ima need you to be super-save-a-hoe && get them back together. Likkee NOW!
    But i do gotta feeling that Nicki && SB gonna end up getting married at the wedding, ^_^
    But even if they don't ima need this Damon nigga to gooooooooooooo, && this...whats thts bitch name... ummm,Shante yeah her, ima need her to mooooooooooove!!!
    Zaria beating that lil girl ass was cute!!
    && SB time w/ Daria was adorable!!
    Everything else need to change.
    K, thanks ^_^

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  37. I cant believe the way Safaree is acting. He knows damn well Nicki wants him, she's just in a tight space now. I'm still waiting to find out what Damon wanted with her finance book so he can get the boot already.

    *waits for your next post which will be in a month* lmao.

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  38. This was a good chap!!

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  39. WHAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTT!!! Damon needs to move out the picture already, shit! '&& Safaree know he aint getting over Nicki ion know why he tried to bring that girl to make Nicki jealous.

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  40. SON. lol okay first im happy Zaria beat that lil girl's ass, which was unusual bc she's the sweet twin. But I like how she & Nic were kept looking at Lucy & her mama. && Safaree is a GREAT dad & the fact that Nic doesnt see how much he is there for her, she's like pushing this marriage with Damon. I know deep down she wants Safaree but telling by her actions, Safaree cant see that. Anyways, Damon needs to move. Daria is truly her mother's daughter. Ethan is a cute liddle coon. && I was literally yelling when i was thinking he was finna hook back up with Shante. I was like "THIS BITCH...OH SHIIIIIT !!!!" lmaoooo. And im crying @ Nic txting ' :"( ' lol but Yes !!! GOOD ASS CHAPTER. Post Soon Gworl ^_^

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  41. @MASHINGTONMINAJ


    D: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH. HOLY SHIT>

    nah son. forreal. like. kjdadlksflkajdlfsd U NEED TO UPDATE.

    U betta make Daria not be bullied.. ma baby girl betta be kept safe n sound and perfect and beautiful :)

    & as much as I want Nic and SB to be together, I also want there to be some jealousy >:D you know. Like the shante bitch stuff.

    DRAAAAMAAAAAAA :D

    k bye. :D

    you better update soon. :)

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  42. yo, shit bout to get AWL THE WAY REAL! Lmfaooooooo im glad Safaree was able to help Daria with her problem. & Zaria stay cracking me up! hahahaha okay, back to the drama at hand....skunsijdbkjnjnsnjndijbiudbiubdibiubdiubdiubdiubudyghubugvsgubs Nic betta get it together! Safaree is being a cubt though by bringing a bitch he know Nic don't like, but she just needs to come to her senses and get him back! at the same time, Safaree is mad cuz she is gonna go ahead and marry Damon, but he left her! He should have never left in the first place! men...Lol

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  43. Man you are an AMAZING writer. i love how you show everyones point of view.
    and "we-tard" was the funniest shit ever. I volunteer with kids every weekend so i know how they act and you depict them so well in the story...its almost like watching a movie because you have the mannerisms and personalities down so well.

    anyways

    I knew he was bringing shante back...i just hope nicki dosnt have to beat her ass again.
    DAMMM I DONT WANT HER TO MARRY DAMONS SNEAKY ASS!!!!!!
    wtf did he do to her finance book? << triflin theiven ass nigga

    and poor daria :( that made me sad...my bf has dislexya, he was bullied too.
    man zaria is a str8 thug i love her lol ...and sb is such a good dad.

    GREAT CHAPTER!! POST SOON!!

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    2. Ooo and what I want/think to happen is:
      Nicki and shante get into it and start arguing, and in all of the excitment some fbi people come in. Everyone stops and looks at who they are then they bust damon for fraud and smuggling money from nicki or something shady (since he like fukin with finance books). Nicki is shocked and turns to ask him if its true. Then out of nowhere SB just dives on him and they start fighting on the ground. Carol takes the kids out so they don't see their parents like this. The fbi guys pulls them apart and they start talking shit to each other. Damon is laughing and sb looks pissed, damon is like why are you still here? She dosnt want you she's my girl now she loves me. THEN sb is laughing and he's like that's where your wrong she's been with me the whole time, wanting to get the one up on damon, not nessesarily tryong to snitch on nicki. Nicki is glaring at sb, sb is glaring at damon, and damon is glaring at nicki. Damons like is it true? Nicki can't answer him. Then sb just blurts out how he really feels about her and she's shoked. Shante feels hella moded and slaps sb talks a little shit to him then leaves, but no one gives af. Then damons like well since everyone is confessing I only wanted your money I stole $1234billion and cheated (or whatever he did) Nicki is still in shock I guess. then sb breaks loose and punches him again. Nicki walks or runs off, sb is calling after her because he just poured his heart out and she didn't say shit because that was A LOT to take in. And once she's calm idk how many days later sb comes over they talk, kiss, make up, have sex, and get back together. Happy ending.

      ...Untill melanie comes back *evil smile*

      ....That's how I picture it going

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    3. YAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!

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    4. ZAMM I LUHH DIS ENDIN

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  44. YAYYYYY!!!! you at 50 comments ^_^. 51 now. Sooooo whens the next chapter?

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  45. my comment's mad late because my laptop kept restarting itself. -_-
    okay.. here it is.. Lmao. YASSSSSS for Zaria defending her sister! They shouldn't be picking on Daria! Dead at Ethan just wanting a dollar just like that, I used to do that ALL THE TIME when I was younger! Lmfaoooo.. my mum would just stare at me like GERRRRRL. Anyways.. YUSSSS to Ethan saying he doesn't hit girls! Lmaoooo Zaria beat her up now, she a G! Lil thug. I love how Safaree knows what's wrong with Nicki without even having to ask.. smh at Damon interrupting their cute moment. Safaree is a great father.. his talk with Daria >>>>>>>>>>> OKAYOKAYOKAY Um. Shante. GRRRRR. I knew it was going to be either her or Melanie.. but I can't believe he actually invited her like wow. ok. so I think all the truth will come out.. somehow. Lol ionno. GREAT CHAPTER! like yo. I live for when you update.

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  46. Nicki should have known damn well SB was going to feelings for her again, i mean she got that star box lol. Carla better make sure the kid chicken aint dry or HoodNika going to come out lol. Oh good Nicki not leaving the kids, im happy bout that idk y tho *shrugs* Oh shit my lil Zbear whooped some ass up at the preschool, YES she thuggin! LOL. Ugh its that lil ugly girl Lucy, she needed her ass beat... hell its about damn time. They need to leave BabyD alone shoot making me mad. Oh her momma better calm herself real quick for she get that ass beat just like her daughter. HA Z so much like Nic they both wont take they eyes off them losers LOL. Thats so fuck up suspending Z but the lil trouble maker gets to write a note, that shit aint far. Aw my poor D wants to go home, Nic should have let her went home -_- Lil E just want money just for the hell of it, he want to stack his paper LOL. Aw Zbear dont cry, u did right! HA Z is BAWSED UP telling her dad to put her boots away lol. LMAO she said she beat the girl up and she dont have no marks on her... thats wut im talking bout Zbear! HA Z was trying to put on that baby talk... Nicki aint falling for that lol try again LMAO! UGH Damon still here like WTF. Damn SB pretty damn pissed, that was kinda harsh wut he txtd Nic tho =/
    Oh hell who the fuck is SB calling, i have a super bad feeling about this and i bet it that hoe -_-
    Aw BabyD all sad now, she not eve hype like she always is (Fix her make her happy again) Aw this is making me mad sad, good SB told her about him having it... maybe that will make her feel a lil better. Um ew at her getting chilli all over her straw, like i can picture it GROSS. Aw yay he made her feel a lil better.
    So Nic really going to go through with this wedding, she know damn well she dont want Damon. She all looking for SB , look at Nic all happy cuz she heard his voice... she want him! Wut the actually fuck does he really have that hoe with him?! Omfg i cant believe it, its about to be some drama. SB U MAKING BIG DRAMA?
    Sorry im late with the comment.
    GREAT CHAPTER, POST SOON!
    ~@NickiMmemphis

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